five mornings in New York

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Title: Five mornings in New York.
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G through to NC-17 c:
Genre: fluff, smut, romance, AU
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody regarding the real boys D8 ..but in this case, the Jin belongs to me and the Kame is sweetpaopuwind‘s

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Re: Guuuuuuh~

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Ah~ who he's talking to is a secret xP I'd assume just someone else from his class, but I actually took out where it said, because I liked it coming across as Jin not knowing (so adding to him feeling a little dejected, because obviously all these other people (that know Kame but he doesn't know them) know something about Kame that he doesn't).

Yay~ nice to hear x3 And.. no, Jin doesn't feel that way~ That's me again.. D; I don't know why, but I always focus on the moodier aspects of Kame's personality. I don't know if it's because I try to avoid a stereotype so go out of my way to show that he's not just a cute little smiley thing, so go to far, perhaps. But I think in probably every fic I've posted with the exception of a couple, Kame's been pretty short tempered ^^; So sorry, again..

lol yeah. Jin was hoping he'd be all 'yay, snow day 8D' and drag him out to a park or something.. all wrapped up warm and with a silly little flask of hot chocolate that Jin insists they take a long but then doesn't want to carry, and he can hold Kame's hand when it gets cold because he has to take off a glove to take photos. ..ah, that would have been nice too ;u;

Ah.. the thing about white lies kind of tied in with toning Jin down to not seem quite so.. Jin-like xD; I don't know if I'd even call it a white lie, because it's more Jin not wanting to comfirm that to Kame and trying to protect him, so.. in his own mind, no, he doesn't really think that, but at the same time knows that his version of events slightly differs from reality >> Therefore it being an unintentional white lie, I suppose..

And.. yeah, I know he does xD; I didn't really get across that Jin was doing that more in a childish way than with much intent, so he giggled because he was more like 'pfff trying to distract me like that~'

OF COURSE 8D lol it was that that decided the entire scene, really..

Gah. They ended up like that because they seem to have figured that it works pretty well for them both (and because Jin just ended up conveniently in the right place for it XD) but I.. actually didn't think Jin was doing much sexy at all x3; I was focusing so much on keeping him from getting all stuttery and nervous, maybe because he's just behaving pretty much as usual, Kame sees more in it than I do 8D;

Mm~ the thing with the sweater. I'm glad you quoted that part x3; I really wanted something in there that showed they have they have a real bond, and just get eachother. Because even if sometimes they do have misunderstandings, there's plenty of time where they don't need words to just.. get things so right ♥

Oh, because you quoted a few of them.. the originals were supposed to be - 'he's ready, more than ready, and Kame, hurry up~', 'Jin pays him no heed and sinks lower, lower, and oh God it feels good,' and the one I'm saddest about is when Jin starts saying 'There', the final one was emphasized.. and boohoo I was so sleepy I didn't even think to check that it had carried all of that over. So.. erase your memory of what you've read and replace with that XD;

I'm so glad you like it ;w; I'm actually pretty sad it's over.. I'm pretty attached to it ^^; But I do enjoy writing (and drawing~) them very much, so I'm glad you approve x3; And.. yeah, your turn XD Especially as that scene with 'ka-chan was soooo cute and really needs to not just be left as it was. Ah~ I saw you sent me some more, I'll read that through when I get home (..we're at work right now xD; I thought I could save time tonight by typing this all up now). WHEN BB IS OVER WE HAVE TO WRITE FIC TOGETHER ;___; Uh. yeah. >>
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