hilum

[shuu_cream]

Title: hilum
Rating: soft R (tags under cut)
Genre: romance, a little angsty and dark
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody regarding the boys >:
Summary: A series of moments, memories, thoughts, nights, problems, and not-problems as Kame works around his conflicting professional and unprofessional relationship with Jin.
Others: grey-a/asexual

Comments

[dori_liv]

This is the first time I've read any of your fics but I will surely be reading more. I also took a little look at your masterpost/artwork and they look good. So, I don't know, maybe expect sporadic and random comments from me scattered through this journal.

I love how you represented Kame and all his confusing emotions and feelings. And the comparisions between Jin and Kame and all the ways they are different/opposites yet they fit together so well ♥ Some quotes I like, because that's how I roll when I read something I love but can't quite find the words.

if he and Jin weren't bound to the same path as a pair.

Kame is a people pleaser but he can't find perfection for Jin

Jin's so free and Kame can't let go, loves Jin with every available beat of his heart,

poking around in his body to try and find some of those good feelings it knows should be there

I don't like boys and you don't like anyone, but we're still here.

emotion but he doesn't know which one.

Kame drifts off to sleep unable to place which beats are his own.

Thanks so much for sharing this

[shuu_cream]

Ahh then welcome to my fic journal ;; it's a bit old and weathered now but I hope there's still some other things you'll like. Thank you so much, and for giving me some quotes - I was trying out a style that came more naturally to me but broke several of the 'rules' I've always stuck to, so I was a bit nervous about it.

[dori_liv]

what kind of rules? /curious
I think your natural style is great

[shuu_cream]

Thank you ❤️ Mostly regarding sentence structure, how much or little and what should be described, how to manage dialogue and emotions.. Agh, I'm so tempted to go back and rewrite some things :C this style feels a lot more expressive. Though I've had this journal for so long, how I write people and how those people think, feel and deal with things has changed too ;; (I had kind of planned on not coming back to Akame and starting over new somewhere else, it's been strange coming back ;__; )

[dori_liv]

It's only natural for your writing to change/evolve overtime.
Ah, akame, always calling us back for more. XD How long were you gone for?

[shuu_cream]

This is true ;; ahh since 2012-ish, I think. I have a longstanding Akame RP with my best friend so I've always kept on writing the RP version, but I totally dropped out of fandom things last year and desperately tried to find something new. Akame was like, horribly embarrassingly so my everything since 2006, it's been a very long on-off goodbye over the past few years (and yet here I am again! Gah xD)