trifold porn for kinkspiration round 4 (theme = underage)

Jan 31, 2012 11:33

Title: Paternal Resemblance (AO3)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings: Black/Potter, Longbottom/Malfoy, Malfoy/Potter
Auhtor Note: written for marguerite_26’s kinkspiration round 4: underage. Something about that woman makes me write my squicks. I thank her now with 3 similarly themed porny ficlets - one darkly serious, one mostly humorous, and one that’s a bit both
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combines book & movie sources, destined enemy sex, challenge, 'sirius', dickheadry, black/potter, naughty bits, neville/scorpius, first time, rating 17+, 'neville', malfoy/potter, angst, purebloods rule, fandom: hp crossgen, slash, 'draco', drama

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pessen03 February 3 2012, 17:51:05 UTC
wow I like the theme very much!!
let's see.. in order..

1. very powerful! I really understand the emotions sirius been going through and still has.. the longing and desperation that is there.. so powerful.. but I gotta say poor harry!! I'd really like to know what he was thinking through all this.. did he feel for sirius or didn't he just put up a fight? did he realise why sirius barked at him and that he was in several ways used like a james-clone..etc..

2. I didn't feel like reading this but I did it anyway.. I like scorpius I think he's a lovely boy most times but I really have an issue with neville.. it's nothing personal but he just doesn't seem that sexual to me so I tend to avoid fics with him.. but scorpius was really funny and sneaky and knew what he wanted! I like that!

3. must be my favorite pairing of these three.. I do feel little sad for scorpius and I hope it was as albus was saying because he'll be crushed from what they did otherwise.. I love how draco can't say no and still wants him later..

very hot and lovely over all.. as I said.. wonderful theme with the unfulfilled wants of the youth and taking it out on their son that looks exactly like them :P and a veru good use of the underage-theme as well.. I really enjoyed reading this..

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shutupeccles February 5 2012, 17:49:20 UTC
What an incredible comment, thank you ♥

1. Harry felt for Sirius, deeply, and interpreted everything from 'Close your fucking eyes' to 'Shit' as guilt. He was mostly correct. It never came between them because Harry's a forgiving soul and Sirius never approached him like that again.

2. Knew this pairing wouldn't be too popular :p so thanks for reading :)
I get your Neville squick, although I have a bit of a kink for the duffer-turned-hero - it's those quiet ones you've got to watch, all suppressed hormones and...ahem. Scorpius' fascination seemed typical thanks to the number of highschool friends who shagged the ugliest, sleaziest males to emerge from primeval slime (often married) simply because they were footballers or notorious in some other way.

3. Um, I'm not even sure what Scorpius feels for Albus, neither is he. He'd probably try to get it on with Harry or James just to piss Albus off and they'd become friends again over their stupid rivalry. Very Padfoot and Prongs in that regard.

♥thank you again♥

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