IRON MAN FIC: Accidentally On Purpose

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Title: Accidentally On Purpose
Author: shutterbug_12
Characters: Tony & Pepper
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Only borrowing. Make love, not lawsuits.
Summary: It was an accident (but not really).
Author's Note: First Iron Man fic, so I'd appreciate beta-like feedback if you have it. 900 words. For earlwyn, who prompted me with "accident". Happy holidays! ♥ Feedback

Comments

[aztec]

Ohh, I liked this a lot! I think you really have their voices down.

[shutterbug_12]

Thank you! It was my first real crack at it, so I appreciate that. <3 Thanks for reading and leaving the lovely comment.

[earlwyn]

EEHEEHEEHEE. (Literally, I made that noise out loud. It's a very disturbing, high-pitched, gleeful laugh.)

Tonyyyyyyyyyy. Pepper. ♥ ♥ ♥

Have a nearly line-by-line reaction:

“Why--why did you take out the wall?” -- BAHAHAHA.

“Tony,” she said, her tone full of unspoken, serious threats. -- Yessss. That is such a great description of Pepper's tone.

“Your room?” He tilted his head (as if he were in actual thought), one eye nearly closed with a squint. “No. No, I don’t think so.” / “You gave it to me.” / “Hmm, yeah, I don’t think that sounds like me. Come on, Pepper. Do you think that sounds like me?” -- *snickers* This entire moment -- so perfectly, perfectly them. Oh, Tony.

“Well, that really doesn’t sound like me.” He kicked another chunk of wall across the floor. “But, look, you can still buy a sexy little dress, okay? On me. Happy birthday.” -- Oh man, you totally have his body language DOWN.

Tony stood silhouetted in the doorway under a lintel of polished, back-lit letters that spelled: POTTS GALLERY. -- Gheeheehee. D'

[shutterbug_12]

<333333 I am so, so happy you liked it. This is pretty much the best comment ever. <333

[crumpled_up]

OH. OH MY GOODNESS. WHAT TOOK ME SO LONG IN READING THIS? OMG.

This is awesome. This is completely Tony and Pepper. Tony's rambling while Pepper's slowly gets more and more angry as he decides to just smash in her wall was made of so much win. And the rambling about her name. Omg. But that is just like him to be a jerk and not tell her what he's up to and then do something nice for her. Plus the image of Tony standing there with his hands in his pockets offering her whatever she wanted just made me go all a;slkdjfa;slkdfjals;dkfj. Gorgeous! ♥

Please keep writing for Iron Man. Now that I know what you're capable of, you have me completely hooked. :D

[shutterbug_12]

Heeeee! Thank you, thank you! I was hoping you'd enjoy it. You're one of the few on my list who is really into Iron Man, so I couldn't resist sharing. ;)