LJ: the Poll Watcher Challenge

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[mcshepylove]

http://mcshepylove.livejournal.com/9265.html

mckay/sheppard second-date

Contents May Be Hot

[shusu]

"Whoa," John said. "The place is different."

"I'm guessing it wasn't called The Place," Rodney said. "Why are we here? I mean, the Air Force Academy is done the road

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[shihadchick]

scooted over from your link on the noticeboard - I love all the snippets from the poll, but I think this is my favourite because, well, COFFEE and parking and ambiguous date numbering and just... hot. seriously, seriously hot. YUM.

John just wiped him up with a Starbucks napkin and went down on him, thumb beating nervously on Rodney's hip.

He also drove really, really fast. Rodney made him stop at a gas station, tore open a packet of raw sugar, and made John suck on his fingers till he calmed down.
And those two paragraphs especially just absolutely knocked my socks off. *dead from guh*

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[shusu]

*fans your dead body*

One detail omitted because of POV (and coffee) -- the salt-sweet of Rodney's fingers. It was that combination, that sharpness. Otherwise they could've just used the sugar packet.

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[shihadchick]

*revived overnight, sees new detail, whimpers, is ded-ified all over again*

NGHHH.

Seriously. Thank you. And mmmmmmmmmm, mental image. (Dear Martin Gero, please make it happen. You have the power. Love, All the fangirls (and boys).)

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[shusu]

You know, that'd be kinda funny. We've seen DH do "on uppers" so many times, but... the Flan! On coffee! I want to see that XD Well, when he's not-blue. And with Rodney.

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[shihadchick]

It really, really would be. Exactly. John and Rodney's Excellent Adventure (with caffeine)! *ponders happily*