"Soul's Bonds", Chapter 13

[shurifanstuffs]

This chapter originally had a very different ending, which I will discuss in an author's note at the end. Enjoy!

I'll post the interlude that comes between this chapter and the next sometime this evening.

Comments

[kikos_ai]

I'd love to see drunk bsquad! teh win!

And the rain scene was very lovely. <3 Very sweet chapter, even if Piggy and Jack threatened it with their antics (the Piggy and Jack show...heheh).

[shurifanstuffs]

I loved it, too. <3 I'm such a sap for sweet slashy fluff. Like Sky said, the kiss in the rain was so cliché, but I always find scenes like that to be so romantic...

Drunk!B-Squad will be coming soon, along with the interlude that takes place between this chapter and the beginning of the next.

[welleg_fic]

Sky loves him. Hooray!

I really loved this chapter.

[shurifanstuffs]

Thanks. :) This was another of my favorite chapters to write, though I am almost regretting not leaving in the subsequent Drunken Hijinx. *lol*

[lttledvl_writes]

Finally some nice squishiness amongst all the angst! Nice rain scene.

And I echo kikos_ai, I wanna see some drunk b-squad too!

[shurifanstuffs]

I love the slashy fluff. &hearts I'm such a sucker for sweet boy-boy romance, it's not funny. Smut is nice and hot to write, but sometimes all they need are snuggles and kisses in the rain.

Drunk!B-Squad scene comin' right up!

[ruinrunner82]

Hehehehe. I would be interested in a deleted scene of the drunk squad. We can ignore the age technicality since Sky is in a jovial mood anyway. XD

Very nice chapter. Kissing in the rain, very AWWWWWW! moment. :D

[shurifanstuffs]

I'll be posting said deleted scene and the first interlude shortly. I'm glad I kept a copy of that scene; I have a separate document with a lot of abandoned plot threads/scenes I scrapped or radically changed.

Kissing in the rain, very AWWWWWW! moment. :D

Like Sky said, awfully clichéd, but still very sweet. :) I've always found scenes like that in movies and such to be so romantic.

[rivulet027]

Oh wow, Jack and Piggy screwed up. They all should've realized they'd freak Bridge out. Good for him for getting angry with them! Loved the disaster of a date and the ending.

[shurifanstuffs]

The date was a disaster, but it still turned out OK in the end, thankfully. :)

Glad you liked it!