"Soul's Bonds", Chapter 3

[shurifanstuffs]

OH NOES ANOTHER CHAPTER?! Don't expect them to be posted this quickly too often. *g* I post new chapters as I finish the one I'm currently working on so I don't catch up to myself and get stuck and have plenty of leeway in case I need to do any major revisions, but I churned out chapter 21 yesterday and am halfway done with 22, so 4 may go live

Comments

[terrific_tina]

Ooh~ suspenseful! When Sky acts like this, it makes you wonder 'How can you not see the slash?' Good writing! Keeps you on the edge of your seat and I nearly fell off mine... ^^;

I'll be waiting for your next update! :)

[shurifanstuffs]

Aww, thank you! :) I dunno when it will be, but I'm glad you've liked it so far. Next chapter's going to be a good one, because you'll find out some of what's happening to Bridge.

[lttledvl_writes]

You surely know how to drag us along, don't you? *g* Best way to hook your readers, btw. I like the use of Sky's journal entry for the closing of this chapter. The references between Bridge's current predicament and his dad's fate - so awesome!

Nice details with Piggy and his food - even if it is yucky! lol!

[shurifanstuffs]

You surely know how to drag us along, don't you? *g* Best way to hook your readers, btw.

I always thought so. ;) I'm really glad you're liking it so far, and I like getting inside Sky's head a little. He's so good at hiding his fear, which is why the journal's such a good device for him to communicate his feelings- of course he'd write stuff in there he wouldn't say aloud.

Nice details with Piggy and his food - even if it is yucky! lol!

I LOVED writing Piggy. He's one of my favorite characters becauser he's so much fun. He and Jack will pop up again later on.

[welleg_fic]

Another great chapter. I can really feel what Sky is going through.

I'm looking forward to the next update.

[shurifanstuffs]

Thank you. :) I'm so glad you're liking it so far. Next chapter you'll finally find out what's happening to Bridge.

[welleg_fic]

That icon is making my mind go all sorts of naughty directions. Unfortunately, I have class in 45 minutes.

[shurifanstuffs]

Mmhmmmhmmm. I love it. I made the icon if you're inclined to grab it.

[kikos_ai]

Yikes! I dunno who I feel more sorry for, Sky or Bridge! I really enjoy the little extracts from Sky's journal. They seem to suit him. All in all a very enjoyable chapter, very well done.

And before I forget...hey Mary, would you at all consider posting to angel_negra and itsbuttery's Power Ranger fan fic archive, Back to Action? http://www.angelnegra.com/b2a/index.php It would be great to see your fic there. I'm still uploading mine (I'm a lazy bastard). Let me know. :)

[shurifanstuffs]

Thanks. :D And yeah, I did the journal thing on a whim and it just seemed to fit, so I kept it. Sky confides a lot of his feelings to it, not stuff he would necessarily ever speak aloud.

And, oh, a fic archive? I'm just not sure. :( I was shy enough about posting this to my own journal, but I don't know about an archive. I'll think about it, but I'm always afraid to put my stuff up in public.

[rivulet027]

Oh wow, this is so good. Felt so bad for Bridge in the begining, and then his bad day just go worse. Now I'm feeling bad for Sky, he's so worried. Wonderful fic.

[shurifanstuffs]

Hey there, and welcome on board! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like it so far. Enjoy the rest of it, there are going to be 26 chapters plus an epilogue.