So Heather was the one that brought Harry back... I had my suspicions, but I wasn't sure if you were going to involve her or not. I'm very happy that you are- porn AND plot?! What more could you possible ask for? Anyway, I'm surprised that James went after Harry immedietly- perhaps he really has changed?
I can't say yay or nay on account of Heather being the one who brought Harry back. I'd rather not answer to any theories until the end of the story. XD But I couldn't NOT involve her, even a leetle.
James is a mystery to be unraveled. That sounds more complex than it is, truthfully.
He's the only Silent Hill monster that has ever made me giggle.
Harry needed some help with a door, lucky him that Valtiel was around.
This plot is very hard to follow. I just had to reread the entire thing, and I must say I'm still wondering a little bit. I can't really recall ever reading a fanfic where James is this utterly... is depressed a good word? No, that's not it. I'm not sure, he seems more human this way though. I guess what I'm trying to get out is that all of your characters are wonderfully developed over the span of this story. It's like you're just continuing the storyline where Silent Hill three left off.
In spite of the fact that I'm (a) writing slash, and (b) writing blatant porn, I still try my very hardest to make the fanfic as true to a Silent Hill tone and complex storyline as possible. If the plot is hard to follow, either I'm doin' it AWWWW RIGHT or all wrong. XD
James is, of course, post-In Water ending; I specifically chose that ending mostly for its dark values and what formed into him meeting Harry in A Sound in Time, and then creating Lost Days.
The PLOT. My god the plot is wonderful. It's rare that a story like this comes along and I read the entire chapter. (I've got a pretty short attention span)It's wonderful.
I've really, really enjoyed reading this series... about the best SH fanfiction I've read, even if it's partially blatant porn. The crossing of the plots of all the games is getting really intriguing, and I do hope you keep writing more of this!
Just stumbled upon this here series(my interest in all things Silent Hill having been rediscovered while wrestling with the ps2 version of SH Origins) Love everything about it so far.
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James is a mystery to be unraveled. That sounds more complex than it is, truthfully.
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He's the only Silent Hill monster that has ever made me giggle.
Harry needed some help with a door, lucky him that Valtiel was around.
This plot is very hard to follow. I just had to reread the entire thing, and I must say I'm still wondering a little bit. I can't really recall ever reading a fanfic where James is this utterly... is depressed a good word? No, that's not it. I'm not sure, he seems more human this way though. I guess what I'm trying to get out is that all of your characters are wonderfully developed over the span of this story. It's like you're just continuing the storyline where Silent Hill three left off.
I'm rambling. Sorry.
Great story. I love it so far.
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James is, of course, post-In Water ending; I specifically chose that ending mostly for its dark values and what formed into him meeting Harry in A Sound in Time, and then creating Lost Days.
I likes ramblin', no worries. :3
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