Lost Days

[alba_aulbath]

Title: Lost Days [part two: reed]
Pairing: James/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Harry is dead. Harry is alive. Neither of them really understand it.

Comments

[rosehiptea]

I really like this. The interaction is compelling and it's all very Silent Hill. I want to know what happens next.

[alba_aulbath]

It's Silent Hill, only with blatant porn. Which I guess is still Silent Hill, but regardless. :3

Thanks very much; I hope you keep enjoying it in the future.

[stupid_n00b]

:D :D :D harry/james = otp tyvm

[joltacat]

Wow...And I thought I was batty for loving this pair. Its a guilty pleasure of irrational slash, but these two make me smile. Interesting fic. The portrayal of James is very compelling, how you sort of took the character flaws that were made apparent in the game and pushed those further. I look forward to reading more.

[l_syllabub]

"Honestly, Harry's worst flaw is being so incapable of helping people."

Ha, oh boy. This Harry POV is spot on. All this (painful!) concern is really hard to read, I mean that in the best way of course. :)

And all the imbalance and sort of...mistiness of the fic (Silent Hill mistiness) and then you get to that snake bit and it's so wonderfully shocking. Which, I don't know if it's just me, really helps to set an interesting tone leading into the sex. Which is chaotic (and hot) and feels kind of on the edge of something dangerous.

See this line "But enough to reach up inside of Harry and make him just about tremble." made me go all melty.

More 'Oh Harry', apologizing a few seconds after James comes out with "What the hell are you?" line *pets* it's adorable in a kind of pathetic way. Poor guy is just so lost.

And James not wanting to think about things at the end there, probably a good idea for him. I'm still loving reading his little thought processes here.