I loved the first installment, and this one is just as wrenching beautiful. Poor Hector, torn to pieces for Paris, and Paris just hurting. (sigh) I look forward to the next part.
*melts* Whoa! I'm so glad you decided to continue this. Sometimes I just want to smack Hector and tell him get on with it. So I take it Paris will make Hector *understand*, with the girl's help? *hopeful grin*
this was another great piece! i could feel the absolute raw emotions from Paris and especially Hector, being so torn in two over his feelings for Paris but also his sense of morality. just lovely fic, absolutely lovely!
once again, the slave girl's pov was incredible. she has the power of an omnipresent narrator but also has a distinct human feel since she is a developed character.
simply put: you're too cool for school! loved it, sweetie!!
It is my goal in life to keeeel people, in a porny way, so yeahy! :P
Thank you so much for your fb, I'm so happy that you are enjoying the fic and could feel the emotions. Like I said above, I'm not sure which one of the boys is hurting more!
I'm glad the p.o.v. works, too. It's a challenge writing from her perspective, but it's enjoyable, too, working with that sort of wise innocence.
Thanks for reading...there should be more of this in future!
I can't wait for those chapters. In the mean-time, I think I'll go re-read that fabu fic you wrote in which Eric kept saying "But I'm married..." That one is one of my all-time favorite Eric/Orli stories;)
Oh, thank you so much! That is so kind of you to say! I really like that one, too...hee...I enjoy these boys so much and here I never thought I could write slash with Eric. :P
You might be happy to know, then, that I've got another of the "Married" fics started so there should be another chapter of that out hopefully soon!
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Thanks for reading!
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Sometimes I want to smack Hector, too. But he wouldn't be Hector if he just gave in easily, right? :)
I'm happy you enjoyed and there will be more. Thank you for reading!
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That was amazing. Truely.
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I'm glad it moved you. Thank you for reading!
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They all think i am strange anyway so no damage done ;p
*sighs* it is wonderful. Most definatly doing something right...very right.
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again, you with the killing me! ;P
this was another great piece! i could feel the absolute raw emotions from Paris and especially Hector, being so torn in two over his feelings for Paris but also his sense of morality. just lovely fic, absolutely lovely!
once again, the slave girl's pov was incredible. she has the power of an omnipresent narrator but also has a distinct human feel since she is a developed character.
simply put: you're too cool for school! loved it, sweetie!!
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Thank you so much for your fb, I'm so happy that you are enjoying the fic and could feel the emotions. Like I said above, I'm not sure which one of the boys is hurting more!
I'm glad the p.o.v. works, too. It's a challenge writing from her perspective, but it's enjoyable, too, working with that sort of wise innocence.
Thanks for reading...there should be more of this in future!
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*squee!!!*
*thinks it may be wrong to enjoy hot trojan brothers... errm, loving each other*
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*shrugs* SQUEE!! but, yeah... i really enjoyed!!
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You might be happy to know, then, that I've got another of the "Married" fics started so there should be another chapter of that out hopefully soon!
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