Comments | shrinetolust: FIC: Touching, Chapter 5 (SB/VM), PG-13

shrinetolust

FIC: Touching, Chapter 5 (SB/VM), PG-13

Jul 12, 2004 22:21

Title: Touching, Chapter 5
Pairing: SB/VM
Author: shrinetolustRated: PG-13 ( Read more... )

sean bean/viggo mortensen slash, shrinetolust slash

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shrinetolust July 12 2004, 21:19:51 UTC

Excellent, really? Flattery will get you everywhere--I wasn't sure about this chapter at all...argh.

And "More or Less"...that's the one you're thinking of. It's been on my mind for months, of course...and it's partially done...but whenever I hit a wall I start on something else and thus get distracted. It's an evil tendencey of mine! But I DO want to get back to it...that chapter takes so much longer because it's heavier than my other fics and I really want to do it justice.

Thanks for reading!

muck_a_luck July 13 2004, 05:02:56 UTC

Oh, oh, oh! Excellent news! I've read that one so many times! :)

And I don't know if this one was hot or ewwwww!

shrinetolust July 13 2004, 08:36:12 UTC

lol...it does leave one with mixed feelings, I guess...hee.

milochka July 12 2004, 21:23:44 UTC

*howls*

Love the banter between these two... it's very easygoing and yet totally fraught with UST on both sides. Yum! Can't wait for the next part.

*sets fire to chaise, just in case*

shrinetolust July 12 2004, 21:40:52 UTC

Yeahy, I got a "howl"!! :P

And the chaise was in use all week...this thing was a total bear. I actually wrote the next chapter first, and this was supposed to just be a little lead-up in that same chapter, but as per usual, the boys took off running and it became 12 freakin' pages! *rugbytackles muses*

Glad you enjoyed it in any case...the underlying tension's not so underlying these days...hee...

jenmstar July 12 2004, 21:44:41 UTC

"Totally ready. I'm not worried, because I'm letting you walk in first."
I almost spit Diet Coke across my keyboard. *giggles*

And the last line. *dies* Too funny. I can't wait to find out if he's joking or not. And find out how Sean reacts. *coughs* Jumps Viggo right there. *coughs*

Wonderful work. Even if you and Sean didn't know where it was going. There was a nice weaving too it. Like real life, really. Great job!

shrinetolust July 12 2004, 22:20:54 UTC

Thanks so much!! I was hoping the weaving and rambling would come off as realistic rather than poorly written...heh. I'm at a place in the fic where Sean's kind of making a turn, but he's not sure yet, so it puts me in an awkward place, too!

Glad the Diet Coke didn't make it to the keys! heee...

And we'll see if Sean jumps Viggo how Sean reacts in the next installment...hee...

Thanks for reading!!

liars_dance July 12 2004, 21:50:26 UTC

Oh, it was lovely to see this at the top of my friends list... *sighs happily* I've been waiting... *drums fingers*

Another fabulous chapter - their dialogue is spot on and in-denial!Sean continues to both delight and frustrate me! As you do of course, with this fic - I'm torn between wanting you to draw it out because I love, love, love the detail and wanting them to wake up and have deliciously hot man sex!

*snogs you silly*

shrinetolust July 12 2004, 22:23:25 UTC

heee...well, I'm happy to delight and sorry to frustrate--no wait, maybe I'm not sorry. :P There's gonna be at least three more chapters to this, so I'm afraid there will be some more drawing out ahead... :D

*thinks of hot man sex*
*guh*

We'll get there...hee...

Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed the boys...*snogs you back* :P

*attacks dear hatted!Vig* Squee!!

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shrinetolust July 13 2004, 08:40:12 UTC

hee...so glad you're enjoying!! I'm rather proud of the way the car scene turned out...especially considering that was originally gonna be about one page in another chapter! :P And I'm glad you feel the warmth from it, too...that's what I want, to have real affection behind the humor.

I think Viggo's starting to slowly get through to clueless!Sean...we'll see... :P