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I Trust You {Kenpachi/Jushiro}

May 01, 2011 01:57

Title: I Trust You
Pairing: Kenpachi/Jushiro
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 1,093
Warnings (if any): Spoilers for episode 317.
Summary: In light of the new threat, Kenpachi has to guard Mayuri during an investigation in the Dangai, and Jushiro can't help but submit to his concerns for the man.
A/N: A little "behind-the-scenes" thought up by a rabid ( Read more... )

c: zaraki kenpachi, c: ukitake jushiro, p: kenpachi/jushiro, fc: otp_100, !fanfiction, r: pg-15, g: yaoi

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gokuma April 30 2011, 18:41:49 UTC

Awwww..! This is a sweet story. I love rare pairings and Ukitake/Zaraki is certainly VERY rare. But (/And) I'd like to read more about them...

gokuma April 30 2011, 18:42:26 UTC

"He's a goddamned deadbeat who wears face paint and ties his zanpakuto against his di-"

Well said, Zaraki. Well said.

stharridan April 30 2011, 23:32:03 UTC

Thank you! Yay, another rare-pairing-lover! I especially love this pairing because it is super rare (I think I'm the only one who writes it!). Hopefully you'll find my other fics as entertaining as this one! :D

cruelest_month May 1 2011, 04:51:47 UTC

I wrote a long fic quite a while ago called Undisclosed Desires and featured with them as one of the major pairings. Jushiro was also seeing Stark and Kyouraku too though.

It's awesome that you're writing so many fics for them! :)

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cruelest_month May 1 2011, 04:47:11 UTC

Aww. Another great story. I really love the way you write both characters.

stharridan May 1 2011, 04:53:35 UTC

Thank you so much, dear! I LOVE writing them, it's just so much fun! ♥

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stharridan May 1 2011, 14:45:59 UTC

LOL, I was actually laughing when I wrote that! I plucked it out from my multi-chaptered fic as in one chapter I made a slight speculation as to why he wears his zanpakuto that way.

Yeah, to authors, reviews are like gas to their car. It encourages them to write more, to be better.

Hmm...to review well? I think that, if you've spotted an error or whatnot, it's best to point it out. And if you've got any suggestions on how to make the fic better, then just voice it out! A good review, in my opinion, points out the goods and the bads of a fic. This way, the author will learn from their mistakes and will try to be better.

I love it when Zaraki turns out to be the one who reassures people and points out the obvious. People often mistake him for a mindless brute, but really, it's just his character. There's just SO MUCH to him.

And I love you for liking this pairing. ♥

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stharridan May 1 2011, 15:01:17 UTC

IKR? But hey, he is a madman! XD

Ah, that's a good point of view, but I assure you, being praised for their writing styles and/or plot or keeping characters IC are, quite frankly, a sight for many authors' sore eyes. Really, imagine them sitting there staring at the monitor screen, burning their eyes out and trying to type something that only gets one or two reviews.

You're very welcome. :)

Zaraki appears in the flashiest scene thinkable! God, I just LOVE how he emerges in Memories of Nobody with the eyepatch off. <3 LOVE!

Oh my God, you've read Rebirth?? Aww, thank you so much! That was actually my first Bleach fic and I really wasn't confident AT ALL because I'd never even watched the series. x)

♥

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