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Promise {Kenpachi/first!Yachiru}

Apr 21, 2011 20:48

Title: Promise
Pairing: Kenpachi/first!Yachiru
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 3,110
Summary: Through the harsh, cruel days in the 80th District, Zaraki stays true to his words while Yachiru struggles to keep hers.
A/N: Written for 1sentence with the theme table Alpha. Contains lots of coma/dash/semi-colon abuse and past/present tense mix-up (I'm never good at ( Read more... )

fc: 1sentence, c: zaraki kenpachi, !fanfiction, r: pg-15, g: het, c: first yachiru

Comments 4

mk_atlanta April 21 2011, 16:43:30 UTC

No one ever writes about the first Yachiru because SOMEONE said he was going to go into Zaraki's back story and has yet to deliver. Hell, Bleach could go on for another ten years just getting into stuff like that. Stop getting bored and creating way too many new characters, Kubo, and finish up with the characters you PROMISED TO TALK ABOUT.

*cough* Sorry. That just kind of makes my eye twitch. I try not to be one of those whiny fans, I really do, but this doesn't make it easy.

Wow, dedicated to me? That's so sweet of you. <3 And the fic...holy crap. Just, wow. It goes from heartwarming to heartbreaking and I just want to go find Zaraki and give him a big hug not that I don't want to normally.

I can't really pick a favorite - they're all so awesome in their own right - but sweet Santa Christ, Supernova. The imagery with that just makes my jaw drop. Damn.

I'm going to reread it later after I put some work into my paper, so I'll probably post more to gush about this. Incredible work all around! :D

stharridan April 21 2011, 23:56:09 UTC

Yay, she likes it! *dances*

I just woke up, and read through this, and went all, "What the shit is with all those typos?! How could I have missed them?! DDDDX" I'm so damn sorry, but I fixed them already! Hopefully none left.

Supernova. <3 It made me cry. Hell, the whole damn fic got me sniffling while I was writing it.

I'm still waiting and waiting and waiting for Kubo to delve into Ken-chan's past. Ugh. He's taking one hell of a time delivering it. In the meantime, I'll just watch previous episodes of Ken-chan (and Yachiru).

And do I have to tell you how much I miss your butt? DX

afteriwake June 16 2011, 21:40:06 UTC

Oh, wow. This was superb, absolutely superb. I wanted to cry near the end.

stharridan June 16 2011, 21:52:08 UTC

Aww, thank you so very much! I enjoyed writing this and I did sort of cry at the end - I thank my sentimental self for that. I'm really glad that you liked this! Not many people really take to this pairing, especially since the first Yachiru hasn't been revealed, so to have some feedback is just awesome. Thank you!