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shou_ni

Heart Shaped Clock - Chapter 15

Sep 22, 2011 21:58

Comments 15

apfelzettelchen September 22 2011, 21:30:46 UTC

ANOTHER CHAPTER!*___*

And yeah! I love your kind of writing smutty things x3

And I love Chickin! I was like: WOAH! AMAZING!

Ahhh... I love this story sooo much!

Wha! Its 23:30 here and that makes my day completely PERFECT!
Thank you for that so much!

shou_ni September 22 2011, 21:49:20 UTC

ahahah thank you, I always feel secretly pervy writing smut but it's all good >;D
Chickin had to be in the story, he's too cute to leave out.
Thank you very much *hugs* Glad I could make your day a bit better.

apfelzettelchen September 23 2011, 12:35:29 UTC

I feel pervy by reading it and thinking that it is really gooood! x3
But I think this is good :3

YEAH! Of course he is *-*

*hugs you back* Thank you. Relly. = )

clawsgalore September 23 2011, 01:59:56 UTC

awwwww... chikin was so cute :D shou too... hehehehehe... loved the smut!!! :D why do i have a bad feeling about the following chapters? there's been too many happy things... :P great job as usual :D

shou_ni September 23 2011, 10:06:36 UTC

aah glad something did ;D
well, I can't give anything away at this point *hums*
thank you for reading and commenting :D

nico_nicoru September 23 2011, 13:25:19 UTC

I thought it was something bad... but the moment Shou took the kitten out, the smile never disappeared from my face ^_^ chickin!!! <3

And the smutty scenes are, as always, brilliant! XD Reading this really made my day <3 Gosh I hope every chapter is as fluffy (and smutty) as this >X3

shou_ni September 23 2011, 17:45:10 UTC

Lol, I didn't think someone would think it would be bad news, I guess it's easy to read it that way now I think about it.

Thank you ^^ I;m really glad it made your day. Weeeelll you'll just have to see ;D

puss_nd_boots September 23 2011, 15:36:18 UTC

The Chickn part was absolutely priceless - especially the names Tora was coming up with. The smut was really hot, too, especially the way Tora teased him before the real action started. Nice chapter!

shou_ni September 23 2011, 17:49:09 UTC

Thanks XD I had fun writing that part haha. I'm not used to writing hot smut, it's usually more fluffy smut, so I'm glad you liked it >< And Tora, he's such a meanie teaser.
Thanks for reading and commenting.

gee_0207 September 23 2011, 22:00:33 UTC

D'aww, and thus Chikin makes his entrance! I had a feeling, as soon as Shou pulled the little 'goblin' out of his coat, that he'd convince Tora to let him stay. And I'm not surprised Shou suffered such a bad hangover- he's said himself he's a total lightweight! I had to hold back a laugh when Shou mentioned about getting the photo framed. Like, of all the times that could come to mind? But, then again, it not as though Tora gave him much chance to tell him sooner~ I also quite like that Tora's not afraid to be a little rough with Shou. I think it would get kind of annoying if he treated him as though he were made of glass or something, so it's nice~!

shou_ni September 23 2011, 23:06:01 UTC

couldn't leave Chikin out XD adorable little goblin.
Yep, I wasn't letting him off lightly for the amount of alcohol he consumed, if I have to get bad hangovers then so does he.
Lol! Tora didn't even answer the question of if they had cake, let alone give him chance to tell him about the photo before he ravished him. I prefer the idea of them being lovey-dovey and funny to each other normally but then rough and tumble in the bedroom, creates diversity I guess.
anyway, thank you for reading and commenting :D