Heart Shaped Clock - Chapter 9

[shou_ni]

Title: Heart Shaped Clock.
Author: shou_ni
Pairing: ToraxShou, some NaoxHiroto
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Angst, Fluff, Smut-ish
Disclaimer: I dont own anyone, just the story.
Summary: When a beautiful guy enters Tora's life, he's smitten. Unfortunately Shou has a secret and he doesn't want to share it

Comments

[gee_0207]

Ah~ you're writing's so emotive, I can't even tell what I'm feeling. I was (mentally) yelling at Shou not to let this happen- well, it's the return of Saga-the-bitch >:( And it was all because of a silly argument, ne~... Poor Shou'll never forgive himself, yet he was the one taken advantage of T_T Why do I get the feeling Saga was just waiting for such an opportunity >_< On a side note, I can totally imagine Mao as a cafe waiter... That image fits him quite well, in my opinion! ^^

[shou_ni]

Emotive, really? haha I'm liking the nickname "Saga-the-bitch" I actually giggled.
Perhaps he was waiting, after all, he did tease Tora in a previous chapter about going after Shou.
I had to resist the urge to put Mao in a frilly apron XD but I do agree, he'd make such a cute waiter.
Thanks for reading.

[clawsgalore]

O___O... O___O... O___O... *speechless* where had THAT come from? That was the last thing I expected to happen... *slaps Saga for being so evil* but it was wonderfully written and good job :D

[shou_ni]

Thank you very much :D
and thank you for reading & commenting ^^

[sazeixrinshou]

*slap Saga with all my might*
poor Shou!!! T_T *cuddle him* Saga had taken advantage of him and now Tora and Shou's relationship threatened >:(
bu-but they'll be okay, right? I don't want to see them break up. :o
btw thanks for sharing ♥

[shou_ni]

Saga is quite the evil guy ><
Well you'll just have to wait a little longer to find out.
Thank you for reading :D

[nico_nicoru]

Yes...this was REALLY unexpected!!! I was literally shouting and pulling my hair at the part where Saga whispered to Shou that they should get a taxi T^T Shouuuuu T^T I feel so sorry for him

[shou_ni]

I was hoping nobody saw it coming XD
Indeed, I feel bad for Tora, I've been quite mean to him during the entire fic T^T
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

[emi_popcorn]

*smacks forehead* and this is why i dont drink, causes too much trouble. oh well, hopefully things will get better (and saga gets a tast of his own medicine maybe?)
Quikie Up-dateie??? yes?

[shou_ni]

This is why I only drink when i'm with friends, so they can save me before I do anything stupid XD.
Saga should look out from now on, it seems Tora is pissed.
I'll see what I can so.
Thanks for reading and commenting :D