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[amor_demi_alma]

Title: This Change

Author: Caitlin,

amor_demi_alma

Rating: G

Pairings: Mallory / Mary Anne

Summary: Mallory Pike is a freshman in high school when she makes and breaks her first relationship. But maybe that relationship is just a stepping stone on her path to self-acceptance.

Author's Note: Written for

elisabeth_grace. Coincidentally, this is my second fic over at

Comments

[quirkytaverna]

This is so sweet!

[amor_demi_alma]

:D
Thanks!!!

[elisabeth_grace]

Thank you! This is so unlike anything I imagined, and I love it.

I love how you show Mallory's internal thoughts; it's so in keeping with the books. And I love the details, like the tissues that Mary Anne keeps in her purse, and that she runs her hands over Mallory's quilt and sits on Mallory's bed.

[amor_demi_alma]

Aaawww.
I'm so happy you liked it.
Thanks for such in-depth praise. :D Or, as Lauren would say, "ego-stroking". :D

[chickwith_stick]

I really think you did well with the characters. Except for Kristy, everyone seemed very well done. You may have been a little ellipsis happy, but it was a sweet story overall.

[amor_demi_alma]

I like elipses! :D
I know Kristy's OOC. I like to think she changes a little by junior year...I just cannot write bossy HS Kristy for some reason.