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Sep 27, 2008 00:32

Title: Not The Last Time

Author: Caitlin,

amor_demi_alma

Pairing: Mary Anne / Dawn

Written for:

elisabeth_grace

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short_takeswho wanted: their house, a disagreement (not necessarily between them), and a messed up paperback ( Read more... )

written for: elisabeth_grace, pairing: kristy/mary anne, character: dawn schafer, author: amor_demi_alma, character: mary anne spier, !challenge entry, pairing: dawn/mary anne, challenge: 13 - mary anne

Comments 8

writingvixen September 27 2008, 07:47:06 UTC

I love sisters. Very nice fic, especially for your first one. I definitely can see Dawn and MA spending the night together like that.

I liked it:)

amor_demi_alma September 27 2008, 07:49:14 UTC

Aawww thank you...That means a lot. :D

writingvixen September 27 2008, 08:03:05 UTC

Oh you're so welcome. It's definitely nice to know people are reading and liking what you're writing.

Glad you're in the community and look forward to seeing more of your work. =)

amor_demi_alma September 27 2008, 08:08:29 UTC

Thanks! :)

lilysela September 27 2008, 10:55:08 UTC

That was such a lovely piece of writing!

amor_demi_alma September 27 2008, 15:32:43 UTC

Awww...Thanks so much!

elisabeth_grace September 30 2008, 20:56:19 UTC

So, I have a fascination with the sister dynamic (mostly because I don't have a sister), and I love that this is about their friendship, and also about bravery and the fright of going to college and being different. I like this line the best:

But her lips stayed on my cheek, not moving, just pressed there, like a gentle hand between my shoulder blades urging me to continue, to keep moving.

amor_demi_alma September 30 2008, 21:00:14 UTC

:)
I hope you liked it! Sorry it was so late. lol