fic: a real goddess, leslie/ben, hard r/nc17
title: A Real Goddess
pairing: Leslie/Ben
rating: Hard R/NC17
words: ~1300
notes: My Leslie's Birthday fic for ashisfriendly!!! THIS IS WHY I REFUSED TO TELL YOU WHO I HAD FOR THE EXCHANGE. Ashley asked for a specific Jerry's Painting AU, but also any smut, so this AU is a little different but there's smut, so... I FEEL YOU WILL LIKE. Thanks to c00kie for letting me ( Read more... )
Jesus, Caity. HOW DARE.
I was like holding my breath the whole time I read this. I think that's what is so great and wonderful about this format, it makes the reader PAY ATTENTION AT ALL TIMES. Not that I wouldn't but everything is heightened. And then add in the beauty of what you wrote and the perfection at which you capture their neeeeeeeeeeed for each other and you have a fic that is not only worthy of holding your breath for but is PERFECT.
The whole 'it's not just me, right?' section should be burned into the fic archives of amazing as a spectacular way of throwing in canon at an even MORE PERFECT TIME THAN IT WAS ORIGINALLY HOLY SHIT. I know I was screaming at you about this but please know it's because I canno teven deal with the IMAGE IN MY HEAD or the SOUND OF HIS VOICE SAYING THOSE WORDS while inside her, I don't know HELP ME. Also SMIRKING.
But of course, my favorite, absolute favorite section of this is the 11th one because god damn if Ben isn't going to get down there on their first time and damnit if she doesn't bring up her status as a goddess that he wont push harder. HOW DO YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEE????
God. This is great, be proud of this, relish in this amazement. Fucking eat a donut, I don't know. Thank you so much, this is amazing and fantastic and you are the best. Thank you, love!
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