fic: simple as it should be, leslie/ben, pg13

[shornt]

title: Simple As It Should Be
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Comments

[scullyseviltwin]

Oh, oh, oh goodness that was incredibly sweet. I loved the breakdown in the timeline of when it DIDN'T happen. What a lovely way of building not only Leslie's anticipation but the reader's.

And this: Or he pops the question and my hand flails and it catches on fire and then I won’t even have a finger to put the ring on? I very nearly laughed out of my chair. So many kudos.

[shornt]

Thaaaaaanks lady! <3

[stillscape]

This is pretty much perfect. I have no words. But I do have an order, which is, write it again from Ben's POV. Please?

[thatdork]

omg, this. This is an excellent idea.

[bowlsohard]

YES! Pretty please with whipped cream on top!

[shornt]

Oh gosh, I'll think about it. Maybe!

[stars_inthe_sky]

So, that was delightful and delicious from start to finish.

[shornt]

Thanks!

[sullen_aquarian]

So perfect and so utterly Leslie. (and also utterly Ann and Ben)

[shornt]

Thank you :)

[anonymous]

god this is just adorable and funny and perfect. I love Ann in this, being awesome and supportive and suggesting to Leslie to just do it herself. Ok, really I've loved every fic where Leslie proposes (even though there aren't many yet but I do know you wrote that other one where she asks him the night she wins the election and that was great too.) But yeah, this was wonderful.

[shornt]

For some reason, while I'd love either of them proposing, I can't bring myself to not write Leslie doing it. Thanks!