RAWR WHAT A STUPID F-WORRRRDDD!!!!
So, I open up my email and see that I got a review on my story, "A Place Just For Me," which I wrote around 2-3 years ago and well before the manga was overwith.
Here's what the dumb fuckhead had to say, regarding A FUCKING FANFICTION:
"good story, but I have some corrections.
1. Kyoko knew both Kyo&Yuki, but didn't know who the hell they were
2. Kyoko was not a babysitter.
3. Kyoko met Kyo after he started living with Shishou
4. Kyo did not kill Kyoko, he just happened to be there at the scene of the
accident
5.Kyoko never worked for Shishou or any of the Sohmas
6.Kyo didn't cut school
7.Kyo already confessed to Tohru about Kyoko's death(read books 20-21)
8.Kyo's curse already broke(don't remember if it was in book 22 or 23)
9.In the manga, Tohru has already confessed her love for Kyo(book 21)
10.Kyo does not get locked up due to the curse breaking, in fact, it may have
happened the same season, but at the least, not even a week before.
11. Tohru's dad did not have a gravestone due to that Kyoko had built a
shrine to him in her house.
12.Tohru does not blame Kyo for Kyoko's death.
13.In book 21, Tohru said the one thing sadder than her mom's death, was
seeing Kyo sad.
14.Kyo never actually wins against Kyo in a fight in the whole manga(books
1-23)
15.Yuki has a girlfriend, her name is Machi. If you don't belive me, read
some of the more later Fruits Basket books.
Thereare many more corrections to be done, but I can't list them all, for I
did not read all 27 chapters of your story due to all the mishapen things in
your story. Other then that, Good story!!"
After I collected my thoughts and realized that this idiot deigned to send me something that I already fucking knew because IT WAS MY DAMNED STORY, I sat down and sent DumbFuck a message.
"I wrote "A Place Just For Me" well before the manga was through. If you had looked at the dates I had published it and completed it, you would have noticed and not wasted your time writing that pointless review. I was there up through to the end through the group FruityGroup, and never had I felt a need to go back and re-write it just so it can go along with whatever machinations the mangaka came up with. I included some spoilers up through to a certain point, but nobody wants to read spoilers when they're not ready for them - especially considering most of those spoilers weren't even known to the world of those who weren't a part of FruityGroup. I always warned when I was giving spoilers. You, giving spoilers within a review, could have potentially ruined the series for someone who has not finished--or even started it--yet. The "mishapen things" (which, by the way, you spelled misshapen wrong, and a few other words) in my story were of my own imagination because there wasn't an ending to Fruits Basket by the time I wrote that story. If you had used your imagination for a nanosecond, you might have gotten pulled into the story instead of being annoyed that it wasn't going exactly the way it was supposed to according to you.
Fanfiction is written for fun. If it was meant to read exactly like the manga - word for word, no deviation from the canon, everything happening the way it does in the manga - no one would bother reading or writing fanfiction because there would be no point. They could just go to the store and get the real thing. So lighten up, and don't try to run people's imaginations or stories based on canon."
What a stupid C-word.
Here's what the dumb fuckhead had to say, regarding A FUCKING FANFICTION:
"good story, but I have some corrections.
1. Kyoko knew both Kyo&Yuki, but didn't know who the hell they were
2. Kyoko was not a babysitter.
3. Kyoko met Kyo after he started living with Shishou
4. Kyo did not kill Kyoko, he just happened to be there at the scene of the
accident
5.Kyoko never worked for Shishou or any of the Sohmas
6.Kyo didn't cut school
7.Kyo already confessed to Tohru about Kyoko's death(read books 20-21)
8.Kyo's curse already broke(don't remember if it was in book 22 or 23)
9.In the manga, Tohru has already confessed her love for Kyo(book 21)
10.Kyo does not get locked up due to the curse breaking, in fact, it may have
happened the same season, but at the least, not even a week before.
11. Tohru's dad did not have a gravestone due to that Kyoko had built a
shrine to him in her house.
12.Tohru does not blame Kyo for Kyoko's death.
13.In book 21, Tohru said the one thing sadder than her mom's death, was
seeing Kyo sad.
14.Kyo never actually wins against Kyo in a fight in the whole manga(books
1-23)
15.Yuki has a girlfriend, her name is Machi. If you don't belive me, read
some of the more later Fruits Basket books.
Thereare many more corrections to be done, but I can't list them all, for I
did not read all 27 chapters of your story due to all the mishapen things in
your story. Other then that, Good story!!"
After I collected my thoughts and realized that this idiot deigned to send me something that I already fucking knew because IT WAS MY DAMNED STORY, I sat down and sent DumbFuck a message.
"I wrote "A Place Just For Me" well before the manga was through. If you had looked at the dates I had published it and completed it, you would have noticed and not wasted your time writing that pointless review. I was there up through to the end through the group FruityGroup, and never had I felt a need to go back and re-write it just so it can go along with whatever machinations the mangaka came up with. I included some spoilers up through to a certain point, but nobody wants to read spoilers when they're not ready for them - especially considering most of those spoilers weren't even known to the world of those who weren't a part of FruityGroup. I always warned when I was giving spoilers. You, giving spoilers within a review, could have potentially ruined the series for someone who has not finished--or even started it--yet. The "mishapen things" (which, by the way, you spelled misshapen wrong, and a few other words) in my story were of my own imagination because there wasn't an ending to Fruits Basket by the time I wrote that story. If you had used your imagination for a nanosecond, you might have gotten pulled into the story instead of being annoyed that it wasn't going exactly the way it was supposed to according to you.
Fanfiction is written for fun. If it was meant to read exactly like the manga - word for word, no deviation from the canon, everything happening the way it does in the manga - no one would bother reading or writing fanfiction because there would be no point. They could just go to the store and get the real thing. So lighten up, and don't try to run people's imaginations or stories based on canon."
What a stupid C-word.