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lip_stick_love July 12 2008, 07:54:20 UTC
I *loved* the first story you wrote in this verse, and I loved this one just as much. Kame & Jin as two sexy, older men with a lot of mileage behind them most definately floats my boat. Well, I think anything you wrote would float my boat, regardless of fandom or pairing. Good writing is good writing.

Thank you again for sharing!

xxx

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winterspel July 13 2008, 17:01:01 UTC
Tia, you are really too nice to me! Thank you so much for your incredibly nice comment. :)

Kame & Jin as two sexy, older men with a lot of mileage behind them most definately floats my boat.

I am so glad! I didn't imagine that very many people would want to read about Akame at this point in their lives, even as an AU, so I'm happy that you like it! ♥♥

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gingifere July 12 2008, 14:15:48 UTC
This is gorgeous. I love that Jin is still unsure, that the years he spent in prison really have taken their toll and more importantly that you show this. I love your vulnerable Jin and your content, happy Kame and how Jin knows he wants Kame but he's scared.

I love everything you write and I love this ♥

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winterspel July 13 2008, 17:05:36 UTC
Aww, thank you so much, sweetie! I wasn't sure if you'd be happy with where your request landed, so I'm awfully glad if you like this portrayal. I thought a lot about how fifteen years in prison might change a man like gangster-Jin, and this is where the story decided to go, so. :) *hugs* ♥♥

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asmilewaiting July 12 2008, 14:54:36 UTC
I love this fic ^_^ I loved Deserve, and so I was pleasantly surprised to see you had written a sequel. I adore Jin in this, he's so different and yet the same as he was in the first fic. You really showed how the 15 years have changed the both of them. The whole feeling of the fic is so on edge, because of the race and the storm, and then the ending is perfect, cutting the tension and making everything seem so hopeful for both of them ^.^ I absolutely adore Jin's nervousness, since it seems so unlike him, and yet makes perfect sense considering everything that has happened. Anyway xD my comments always end up too long, but I love your fic, and this one is as gorgeous as all the rest ^_^

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winterspel July 13 2008, 17:11:06 UTC
Thank you very much! You can also thank maya_morning because I certainly never imagined for a second that I'd write any more of the American Gangster AU until she requested it! :D I very much appreciate your kind comment - it's always lovely to read the specific things that stand out to a reader, and believe me, there's no such thing as a "too long" comment. &hearts♥ :) I'm really glad that you think this portrayal of them is realistic considering the experience and passage of time it reflects. :)

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mienai1582 July 13 2008, 09:06:58 UTC
I love this verse and this has only made me want more ♥

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winterspel July 13 2008, 17:13:25 UTC
*squishes you* I'm so glad you like it, darling! ♥♥ Like I told acchikocchi, I would love to come back to this 'verse because now I know where Jin hid his money! :D

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ina July 13 2008, 11:16:29 UTC
Very very nice. I love this mature versions and the glimpse one gets of life after the "main story".

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winterspel July 13 2008, 17:14:54 UTC
Thank you so much, Ina! ♥♥

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