White Collar fic: Port in a Storm

Feb 13, 2014 17:00

Title: Port in a Storm
Fandom: White Collar
Word Count: 5600
Summary: Section Chief Corinne Brauer of the FBI's DC office is having a very strange day. Set after the end of season five; spoilers for 5x13. Outside POV with Neal, Elizabeth and Peter.
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kanarek13 February 14 2014, 07:46:08 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for this treat ♥ It was such a wonderful surprise to wake up :D

I have so much love for the entire story, everything about it is just perfect and exactly what I was craving. I always enjoy outsider's POV, I find it fascinating to be able to see our boys through a stranger's eyes :D They really are impossible to put down in words, heee.

Corinne is just wonderful, a mixture of professionalism and, like she said herself, a human being, which I think is exactly the kind of person Neal best responds to ♥ Definitely a Peterish vibe there :D

Love Neal stealing Corinne's things all the time, awww, each small theft a symbol of gratitute - can there be anything more Neal about it?

I think my favorite part will have to be Peter and Neal's reunion at the hospital, when Neal ended up draped on Peter's shoulder ♥ Scenes like that melt me instantly :D But the first scene at the FBI office, when Neal was finally able to speak to Peter - that was so dramatic and heartbreaking and so, so wonderful ♥ Even through the phone the deep connection between the boys is so clearly there, awww ♥

Really amazing \o/ Thank you so much for writing and sharing, yay \o/

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sholio February 28 2014, 04:55:00 UTC
Thank you so much! Your comments are always lovely. ♥ ♥ ♥ I'm so delighted you enjoyed this! I haven't written much outsider POV in this fandom, but it's always fun to depict our boys through a stranger's eyes. They really ARE very strange when viewed from the outside. XD *cuddles them*

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