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Doctor Who, Eleven / Rory, NC-17

Jul 19, 2010 23:59

Title: Twenty-one Kilometres Under the Earth
Pairing: Eleven/Rory
Summary: AU version of 05x09. This is why the Doctor should never tamper with time.
Warnings: Explicit sexual content.
Author: blacktofade
Words: 10,319
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Dedicated to my darling fallsaddles for being amazing. Borrowed a bit of Prufrock from T.S. Eliot because I could. This has not been ( Read more... )

my tardis is bigger than yours, includes: first time, includes: frottage, includes: molten sexual tension, includes: happy ending, pairing: eleven/rory, includes: handjobs, he can travel my time any day, fandom: doctor who, genre: au, includes: drug use, style: long fic

Comments 37

fallsaddles July 20 2010, 10:34:37 UTC

I could hear Rory's voice in my head throughout this! Well. Not like, in the clinically insane way, just that I could hear his lines in his voice as he was saying them. I'm writing this as I read so it might be a bit long and also more than a bit disjointed.

The Doctor smiled. “Nothing has to have a reason to be. Some things just are. They’re what make life much, much better.”

For one confusing moment, Rory almost believed the Doctor was talking about far more than one tiny little button.

That line, just. Amazing, very Eleven, I'd say?

Oh God, the really awkward hug in the TARDIS! I--- it's very them, and this sounds corny, but it is very them. And I'm not sure what you were complaining about, because so far I cannot see any shit writing to speak of. The Doctor's complete disregard of personal space and timing, I enjoy it.

Rory swallowed nervously at the sight before him. Pale skin against burgundy elastic and brown tweet sounded like something he’d see in a geriatric ward of Royal Leadworth Hospital, but in front of him, upon ( ... )

blacktofade July 20 2010, 17:02:08 UTC

AH this makes me unbelievably happy! I'm ever so glad that this worked for you and that you could hear Rory's voice :3

Also, thank you for pointing out the mistake it has been fixed now :D

Man, you leave the sweetest comments and you're an absolute doll. Ta for holding my hand through this and helping with ideas. I really appreciate it! *tacklehugs*

gracefulfool July 27 2010, 22:21:50 UTC

I just wanted to let you know that I have not had a chance to read this yet even thought I really, really want to - I'm sure it's awesome and so are you! Soon I'll have time! :D

gracefulfool July 27 2010, 22:22:51 UTC

Oh, shoot, I meant to post this comment on the main post, not your comment - sorry about the thread hijacking! I'm inept today...

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museycaly July 21 2010, 00:27:38 UTC

This was truly awesome! I usually find it hard to hear both rory and eleven's voices in fic, but this was just perfect. And the smut was quality, which definitely helps XD

Great stuff, hope to read more from you! x

blacktofade July 21 2010, 02:01:38 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so happy that you liked this :D

Cheers for stopping by!

beautybecks July 21 2010, 16:53:55 UTC

Awww, so adorable, and hot, and PERFECT! So in character, so well-written and well-paced. I love it!

blacktofade July 21 2010, 17:55:01 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it :)

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blacktofade July 21 2010, 22:40:47 UTC

Eee! Thanks so much, dear! ♥♥

gracefulfool July 28 2010, 04:26:10 UTC

Oh, this is amazing - you're amazing! I love the slow inevitability of it - how the Doctor and Rory just slowly drift closer and closer with each nudge of the universe or the TARDIS. Man, now I really can't wait for the next series...

Oh, and also? GUH. \o/

blacktofade July 28 2010, 04:59:37 UTC

Aw! Thank you so much sweetheart! Glad you liked this :D I really hope they keep Rory for S06! If not, there will be many letters written filled with complaints! xxxx