Help a Writer
My critique group loved the water and clay analogy, y'all, yay! Now I need your help with somthing else: Chemistry.
I'm not sure what to look for, so I come to you guys and your vast knowledge. I need something that's has constant energy - I keep thinking like an electron or something, only it's been over *gulp* 20 years since I had chemistry. My guy is trying to describe someone who is always in motion, and even when she's not, the air around her seems to move. Know what I mean?
What the hell am I doing writing someone who's way smarter than me? *sigh*
You guys have any ideas?
I'm not sure what to look for, so I come to you guys and your vast knowledge. I need something that's has constant energy - I keep thinking like an electron or something, only it's been over *gulp* 20 years since I had chemistry. My guy is trying to describe someone who is always in motion, and even when she's not, the air around her seems to move. Know what I mean?
What the hell am I doing writing someone who's way smarter than me? *sigh*
You guys have any ideas?