[Fic] Wilted Orchid - Aoi/Uruha - 1/1

[shizukasou]

Title: Wilted Orchid
Chapters: 1/1
Author: Translated from Italian by

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Ahh, poor Uruha, broken like the vase. I think his emotions and state were nicelly described, lots of imagery like sitting on a wet floor. His way of avoiding conflict and trying to grasp on threads to keep something he had with Aoi was understandable. Too bad it is something long gone. Aoi was just too cold and I couldn't understand how Kai could be such a backstabber.

Now, when will you post something of your own? :3

[yhue]

Oooh, you sneaky bugger. lDD

[kawasakininja]

xD

[shizukasou]

Aww, thank you so much. Me and the author are really flattered. c:

Aaannnnd~ When I'll have time and will to keep writing, probably. >o

[shizukasou]

Ikr. That quote's a stab in the heart, I mean really.

Thank you for reading and commenting :D

[ma_yu_ri]

everything is nicely done. and that quote too. very fitting.

very beautiful.

[shizukasou]

Thanks c:

[noctiferi]

it's really nice <3 though it's sad to see how Uruhas is treated and still can't find the will to leave :(

[shizukasou]

It's very sad indeed. D:

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥