floating petals (3/3)

[shizukanai]

title floating petals
pairing yunho/jaejoong
genre au,historical,romance
rating nc-17
summary Jaejoong is willing to sacrifice many things for the sake of his family, even himself when the governor asks him for his hand in marriage. But despite feeling comfortable around the man more than twice his age, it's rather the man's elusive son Yunho who

Comments

[theladysilver]

Oh my gosh! Yoolie! This fic is so lovely! I've been waiting for you to finish this before reading. I read all 3 parts today in one sitting and I have enjoyed reading it. I can see how much you've improved, yet again!

I must say though, at the beginning of the fic, I've suspected that there was something that the governer was not telling anyone. I have this strong feeling that he is planning to wed Jaejoong not to himself, but to Yunho. His insistence of the two of them spending more time together and getting to know each other had me suspicious. And all the while, the way he interacted with Jaejoong reminds me of a father talking to his son. And the governor never directly addressed himself as Jaejoong's future husband. When talking about Jaejoong's groom, he refers to him as 'your future husband,' giving the implication that he is talking about someone else and not about himself.

Now, imagine my delight when I read the 3rd part and found out I was right! I must say, that was rather clever of you! Such a good and sweet plot! Also, the way you wrote the smut remained true to the whole tone of the fic and as well as the time period. This is really a good one from you Yoolie! Good job! I hope you'll be able update some of your other YunJae fics or post new lovely ones!!

P.S.
Good job on the smut! It was nicely written. A nice change of pace from the usually smut that I've read.

[shizukanai]

Aww thank you so much :') I wann keep improving like this.

Right? If one looked closely, it got pretty obvious what the governor's intentions were but I tried hard to keep the hints at bay. I'm glad I could keep at least some suspense going until the very end.

I was a little unsure of the smut because I have not written any in a long time and it's for a historical fic so that doubled the pressure. But I'm glad it's being received so well by my readers. :')

[theladysilver]

You're welcome bb!! XD Just keep on doing what you're doing and you'll continually improve, like you always do!

Mostly, you have to read between the lines. But if you get too caught up with the idea that it was the governor who asked for Jaejoong's hand, you might end up missing out on all the hints. It's so easy to get caught up with Yunho's and Jaejoong's feelings that one might miss out all the hints. Which in my opinion, shows how well thought out and written this fic is. I can slowly see the direction of your writing style is going, and I must say, it's a good one.

You did a good job on the smut Yoolie! I hope you can write more YunJae, or at least update on your other stories! Hope to see more updates from you soon BB! Again, good job on this one!