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Advent Drabblender, Door 13

Dec 12, 2011 22:12

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apsaraqueen December 13 2011, 06:40:02 UTC

She doesn’t really do Christmas.

At least not in this city, she hastens to explain. All the tourists and newcomers in the streets, all the tinny carols in the shops. Peppermint mochas at Starbucks - there’s no way they’re not made with a hefty shot of Colgate - and roasted chestnuts at every street corner cart that successfully manage to both smell like sugar and taste like shit.

Newcomers aren’t all bad, Nixon lets the tips of his fingers just brush hers. She goes red - red as the merry lights strung across the wall - and snatches back the receipt. I don’t get it, she tells the cash register, punching at buttons and biting her bottom lip; he longs to be biting it instead, hard enough to make her do more than just blush.

I don’t get why everyone thinks Christmas here is some kind of magic.

Isn’t it, though ( ... )

continued... apsaraqueen December 13 2011, 06:41:03 UTC

Nixon promptly congratulates himself on his balls, which are epically large and furthermore, epically cold. Reindeer balls. Nice. Twenty degrees and he’s sweating like it’s ninety, praying his palms don’t get clammy, but if she notices, she doesn’t let on. You know what I really want? she muses, her sweet face gone serious. What?

I want to see the stars.

He doesn’t mean to chuckle, but the chuckle gets away from him nonetheless. Low and slow, developing color like an old-school Polaroid. Nixon knows he’s making her self-conscious, her hand pulling away. He holds on tight and his laugh’s like a foghorn. The stars, huh? he manages, finally. C’mon. Drive a harder bargain. You can keep your Colgate mochas, ‘cause sweetheart, I’ll show you the stars for free.

Big talk - for a small town boy. Nixon likes that, that husky honeyed challenge, that sprinkle of freckles across her reddened nose. And wouldn’t he like to kiss each and every one? To follow that constellation all the way down to its inevitable conclusion? Sure, he was the one to ( ... )

Re: continued... satine86 December 13 2011, 06:55:14 UTC

I replied and then it wasn't there.... and things are tripping ME OUT!!!

AND THERE'S MORE FOR ME TO SQUEE AT!!! HA HA HA!!!!

He's from El Paso!! AWW SOUTHERN DRAWL! AND HE HAS A COCKSURE GRIN (which of course he does, but yeah) AND HE WANTS TO BITE HER LIP AND TAKE OFF HER PANTIES WITH HIS TEETH!

And she blushed when their fingers first touched and chia Shrek is hind things!?

REINDEER BALLS?!? AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

God, the descriptions you use...

"Low and slow, developing color like an old-school Polaroid." And the way your describe the city and the stars and and and... screw you, BAMF! If I didn't love you so much I would hate you for your awesome!

WRITE MORE CRAPPY FLUFF! I WILL HAPPILY READ IT AND SQUEE!!

Re: continued... apsaraqueen December 15 2011, 05:27:21 UTC

LOL. i don't know how much more cheese my arteries can handle, so...>D glad you liked it kate!

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thunderandwood December 13 2011, 16:01:22 UTC

Nico, y u so perfect?

I've always loved Lita being the one to forge peace with the shitennou. Just another reason she's my favorite senshi ;-)

Nico may appear a little rough around the edges, but in your 'verse he has the best head on his shoulders. I like it!

adodds122781 December 13 2011, 16:21:07 UTC

“You’re Mamoru’s friends. He’s not really had a lot of friends before, except us girls. You’re important to him, so that means you’re important to Usagi, and I love both of them, so that means you get cookies.

Lita I love your reasoning behind why Shitennou get cookies! I wanna be friends with Mamoru to get awesome Lita cookies!

How sweet of Nico to bring soup and tea that taste like black licorice, grass and ass it's always the thought that counts!

ellorgast December 13 2011, 20:53:34 UTC

Awww! What a sweet gesture!

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thunderandwood December 13 2011, 16:11:22 UTC

AN: A sequel to the Christmas card prompt (door eleven I believe). Bordering on being crack!fic to some extent ( ... )

Continued... thunderandwood December 13 2011, 16:12:37 UTC

The front of the card was identical to Usagi’s, but when it was opened several camera photos fell out onto the table ( ... )

Re: Continued... adodds122781 December 13 2011, 16:25:46 UTC

yeah I don't see Kunzite taking a part in making that card! lol love these guys!

why am I not surprised to see that Marmoru is the first to pass out and gets the marker and "penis" on the forehead! lol poor Mamo-chan!

I wanna party with the Shitennou next Christmas! sounds like a frat party I'll be sure to bring a keg and a marker to draw some more obscene drawings and words on Mamoru!

Re: Continued... thunderandwood December 13 2011, 17:22:47 UTC

Yeah, the guys are self-aware to know that if Kunzite finds out they're all in trouble ;-)

And yes, Zander is a college student in this 'verse but Jude and Nate also fondly recall their college days (Jude's the ex-frat boy). They certainly bring the funtimes to Mamoru pretty hard...poor guy can't keep up!

Thread 13

satine86 December 14 2011, 02:16:40 UTC

A/N: Another true drabble. I'm behind on fic and comments. :O

Jin walks Rei home that night, and it seems colder than the evening before when he made the trek to the shrine alone. Beside him, Rei is quiet, but the silence is not strained.

He escorts her up the many steps, to the door that leads to her room. Her nose is red and cheeks pink from the cold as they stop and face each other.

“I hate the cold!” She says.

“I could warm you up,” he teases.

She smiles, and leans up, lips just a hairsbreadth from his. “You wish,” she whispers with a giggle before disappearing inside.

sailorcopperowl December 14 2011, 20:04:28 UTC

Hey, wait, what? That's it? But you were hinting. Hinting! Gah, I'm not good at waiting... Jadeite, do something!

jenbunny December 17 2011, 05:26:22 UTC

loved it

jpands December 19 2011, 10:28:28 UTC

lol is it bad that I also wish he could? ^^:;

Ah Jin and Rei, the tension between you two is so thick! Please let something happen soon lol ^^: Nevertheless, I love these moments between them and am always so eager to read more with these two! Awesome job!