Advent Drabblender, Door Four

Dec 04, 2011 12:38

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satine86 December 4 2011, 19:39:02 UTC
Oh my god, this is hilarious!!! I really like your Lita and Nico. And the banter and fighting is priceless!!

“I took you out of that rock. Don’t make me put you back in it.”

“I’d like to see you try, asshole.”

LOLOLOLOL!!

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jenbunny December 4 2011, 23:35:17 UTC
oh my goodness, this has made me laugh so hard. It was sooooo great ^^, I loved it!

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warriorofice December 5 2011, 00:55:45 UTC
LOL I love the "Don't be" and the matching Jed-Nico thought processes. And how the guys get all grabby with the cookies!

And the Mamoru/shitennou friendships are really lovely. I'm glad they've reached a point where he can joke about putting them back in the rocks. That implies such a complete level of adjustment -- it's super :)

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satine86 December 4 2011, 19:34:18 UTC
Author: Satine86
Who: Rei
Rating: G
A/N: Same verse as the others. True drabble! Woohoo!

Usagi was cramming her face, while Makoto tried to stop her from devouring the entire plate. Minako snuck behind and stole what few cookies were remaining, and Ami sighed at the whole thing.

Really, it was Christmas as usual.

The fact that they were older, no longer young girls, but young women, had no affect.

The only difference was the presence of the Shitennou.

Rei thought she should continue with tradition and help stop Usagi, but she found she couldn’t keep her attention from Jin. So she quietly watched him, sipping her at punch and waited for the perfect moment.

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warriorofice December 5 2011, 00:57:30 UTC
I love that Usagi and Minako are ganging up on Mako. And Rei lying in wait for Jin!!! :)

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sailorcopperowl December 5 2011, 23:29:46 UTC
Perfect moment for what? Cruel way to end this drabble, I want to know what happens!
And, christmas as usual? With Rei and Jin? Aha. Who's in denial here? ;D

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satine86 December 6 2011, 00:01:57 UTC
The perfect moment is revealed behind door #3

Because none of these are in order. LOL

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anonymous December 4 2011, 22:20:42 UTC
Christmas Cookies by SailorCopperOwl ( ... )

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lovelylytton December 12 2011, 18:00:59 UTC
Even though I do feel mean saying this, I quite like that stellar student Ami Mizuno is not good at everything.

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adins December 5 2011, 04:44:03 UTC
Jed's train was wheeling freely around its loop in its mad bid to catch its own caboose. The tree was finished and Zoey had mercilessly decided to forgo the fake spray-on snow. Very little blood was shed ( ... )

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warriorofice December 5 2011, 19:46:45 UTC
Fantastic! I love the interactions, like the difference in Zoey and Mamoru's greetings to Neil and the "Can I help you?"/"I think you're forgetting the true meaning of Christmas" exchange. Also Mamoru's disco ball and anecdote are hilarious, and even the holiday spirit is getting to Ken!

And Mako made him a special cookie!! Which I so want to eat right now.

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sailorcopperowl December 5 2011, 23:32:46 UTC
I want that cookie too! There should be something like a drool warning on this story ;D
The true meaning of friendship indeed. Merry Christmas, Mamoru. ;D

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adins December 14 2011, 04:14:28 UTC
Thanks! The disco ball anecdote is hilarious because it's 100% true and ripped straight out of my childhood. And I do still have that disco ball ornament and it features prominently on my tree each year. =D

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satine86 December 5 2011, 05:44:25 UTC
Eeeeee Adins is playing with us!!

Oh, boys being boys.

"Sorry, just checking to see if you squeaked 'cause you're so clean."

That seriously made me snort laugh.

His left eye and the corner of his mouth twitched as if he'd just had a mild seizure and offered Neil a jealous, thin-eyed, gluttonous grin.

This is the most AMAZING line EVER!

And I love that Neil is angry about traffic and never takes off his coat and drinks all the beer and that he gloats because his wife is the best baker ever. :D

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satine86 December 5 2011, 05:45:09 UTC
And I forgot to close my italics. X(

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