[FIC] Delayed Reaction (Damon/Elena) M/NC-17

[shipperjunkie]

Title: Delayed Reaction
Author:  shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 1200
Rating: M/NC-17
Summary: PWP. This is a prompt fill for badboy_fangirl's Damon Salvatore Comment Ficathon. (GO PROMPT/WRITE!)  Candy’s prompt: Damon/Elena, they have a sexual relationship now (it's not the first time) but Damon's...er, having a hard time. Getting there. So Elena

Comments

My second favorite...

[fallinangelz21]

Yup. I've decided that this is my second favorite thing you've written after Hot Mess. It's just delightfully fun to read. Fluffy, yes, but with an awesome smutty edge.

So, I was reading this and thinking…how does one review porn? I mean, like really… “Nice work, Katie. Great description of Damon riding her and I can really picture the way he’s got her legs over his forearms and is practically bending her in half…”

Yeah, no. That’s weird.

All that said, I actually DO have to comment on the fact that you write smut really well. You address the not-so-glamorous aspects of sex - the sweat, hair sticking to bodies, toes cramping, knees hurting, etc - in a way that somehow makes it that much more intimate and completely sexy. So, kudos. Skill is skill and while I know that you want to branch out and develop your writing in other ways, you shouldn’t diminish how naturally skilled you are in this aspect.

Elena never really has multiple orgasms, not unless he goes after it with a single-minded determination like it’s his goal in life to get her off more than once in rapid succession. On the rare occasions he does manage to make it happen, she’s so fried afterward she won’t let him near her clitoris again for at least a day, sometimes two. That never goes over well with him. As far as he’s concerned, Damon and Elena’s Clit are the best of friends by now (DS+EG’s C 4Eva) and he doesn’t like to be away from his new buddy for that long.

I had to quote this entire paragraph because the whole thing was fantastic and I was laughing SO much. I freaking loved it. I keep rereading it and giggling.

Elena ordering him to come was freaking hot. And yes, Damon would get off - literally - on her being bossy.

I can’t pick out specific moments to quote because I just really enjoyed this whole thing. It’s hard for me to fathom a time when Damon wouldn’t be able to get off with Elena (or anyone, really) but the way you write this is so marvelously believable that I totally buy it.