[FIC] The Art of Being Supportive (Damon/Elena) M
Title: The Art of Being Supportive
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 2,206
Spoilers: Post 3x22
Rating: M/NC-17
Summary: Elena and Damon, biting, bloodplay
Author’s Notes: I guess I wasn’t done with Elena biting Damon. This is a sort-of sequel to ‘Next Time and the Time After That’ but can be read as a stand-alone one shot. ( Read more... )
This is just filled with everything my fangirl heart desires: HOT SEX, jealous Elena, sweet touches, and did I mention the incredibly HOT sex & biting???
You have both of their characterizations down pat (and you know I'm a total snob about that). Everything they said and did felt exactly in character for them.
Onto the particularly brilliant lines:
Elena, he thought, his brain supplying him with information his body already knew.
This is so eloquent and sweet and speaks to the connection he has with her <3
He wondered, somewhat fuzzily, if her clothes were strewn about his room or if she’d left them in a somewhat tidy pile beside the bed.
So adorable that even partially drunk and not fully awake, Damon is still a neat-freak :P
Elena nuzzled the tip of her cold nose against his shoulder.
This makes me purr inside. Her finally giving in to her desire to touch him ... mmm
When she did speak, her voice was soft. “Jeremy brought Matt home with him after work. They . . . may have mentioned seeing you at the Grill.”
I can so picture her being hesitant to say this and bring to light the fact that she's totally jealous!!!
“Have you met me? You ran through the fucking woods to do a bed check. Here I am, you idiot.” A little drunk, half awake, fully hard, Damon caught her roaming hand and tugged it toward his erection.
TEE HEE!! Damon's snark is awesome and the sentence that follows just put a know in my insides ...
His hips shifted restlessly and he wrapped his hand around her fingers, tightening her hold on him, and he taught her how he liked to be touched as they stroked his shaft together.
Elena's assertiveness and this ... GAH!
Elena clenched tightly around his cock as she fell apart beneath him, her guttural cry of pleasure calling to something deep within him.
Did I mention that you're killing me here??? As in, just dead!!! How is it that these two turn me on so fucking much??? *ahem*
“We’re vampires, Elena,” he reminded her, voice firm yet gentle. “You’re a vampire. Don’t be ashamed of yourself when you fuck like one.”
Yay for Damon setting her straight!!
“You mean, like, ‘What’s going on between us?’ or ‘What in the hell do you feel for me, you devil woman-child?’”
LOLOLOL
Damon is just so on-the-money when it comes to Elena!!!
“Look, the last few times I demanded a straight answer from you, Elena, it didn’t work out so well for me,” Damon said, trying and mostly succeeding to keep his voice relatively light. “I’m not going to push you.”
At that, Elena tilted her head to the side and narrowed her eyes suspiciously. “Are you sure I didn’t take too much blood? You don’t sound like yourself.”
This is just sublime the way you have him trying to be the better man, and her questioning it, because she knows better. :P
“I just forget how young you are sometimes. Do I need to pack you a lunch in the morning, little girl? Drive you to school? Pick you up at three so we can share a milkshake at the Grill?”
Such a smartass, but very effective in reminding the audience that she is but a young girl. <3
The closing is a wonderful balance of sexy and quintessential Damon with just a touch of affection. *sighs*
Please tell me that you will always continue writing these two. I don't think I could go on if I thought otherwise. ;)
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Thank you thank you THANK YOU for such a lovely, funny comment!
This may be a weird confession, but this is still my favorite of my own stories, and I'm so glad you liked it and found it hot!!! <3333
This is just filled with everything my fangirl heart desires: HOT SEX, jealous Elena, sweet touches, and did I mention the incredibly HOT sex & biting???
YAYYYYY!!!! <3333 I will admit the biting aspect continues to, erm, fascinate me but I stopped writing it because I was afraid I was just repeating myself.
Thank you bb! :))))
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Both Elena and Damon giving the same warning and having them both react so strongly was incredibly, er, arousing.
I really hope you find ways to incorporate that into all your future stories ... hint, hint ;)
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