One Path Chapter 31--Plans Gone Awry

Apr 14, 2007 23:26

Title: Plans Gone Awry
Author: Lionchilde
Summary: Palpatine could feel the boy's anger building, feel him struggling to rely not on it but on the Force. Anakin Skywalker wanted to be a Jedi. He wanted to release his desires, his hunger for revenge against the man who had severed his hand, and allow the Force to direct him. He wanted Kenobi's ( Read more... )

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janetlin April 15 2007, 05:00:03 UTC
*starts the "I hate Palpatine!" chant*

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 05:00:46 UTC
...it's been going all day here...lol.

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janetlin April 15 2007, 05:32:46 UTC
Yes, but I meant for the rest of us groundlings.

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 05:41:30 UTC
lol

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erikssiren April 15 2007, 06:01:40 UTC
I like that you let Anakin make the effort to bring Dooku into custody, instead of just killing him as he does in the movie. This way it's a bit more of an accident and a last desperate attempt to keep him from escaping. Great job, as always!

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 06:08:53 UTC
Thanks. I think it's appropriate this way for several reasons, given the AU. Plus that part of the movie just irks me. :D

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lhinneill April 15 2007, 13:08:46 UTC
Great chapter, Dar. :)

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 16:06:26 UTC
Thanks, Jess. ;) *hugs Aslan*

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lhinneill April 15 2007, 21:21:14 UTC
*assists*

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lealynnkenobi April 15 2007, 14:19:58 UTC
*takes frying pan..whacks Palpy for good measure* Ahhhh, he is so evil! I can't stand him...he's like a thorn in Anakin's side, aching him on...on and on... And wants to leave Obi-Wan to die... No one hurts Obi.. :)

And yes, I also like how you wrote how Anakin killed Dooku...

"His fate will be far different from ours, my young friend, he smiled to himself. That much I promise you." That brought chills up my back..when I read it.

Another chapter...well done. :)

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 16:10:03 UTC
*whacks and whacks and whacks and whacks Palpy!* If he would just leave Anakin alone it would be okay! *whacks more*
Thanks.

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anonymous April 15 2007, 21:06:01 UTC
WOAH! This was really, really good! You're showing Anakin's slow turn tot he dark side very, very well, and this was an excellent show of it. Brilliant!

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so_out_of_ideas April 15 2007, 21:08:31 UTC
Thank you.

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