One Path Chapter 30--Brothers

Apr 12, 2007 14:33

Title: Brothers
Author: Lionchilde
Summary: Whatever differences might exist between them, Obi Wan and Anakin would both be exactly where he other needed, every time, without fail. Anakin had proven it when he saved Obi Wan from Asajj Ventress--proven it again by saving the child who had become his namesake. It had taken little Ani's birth to ( Read more... )

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aruna7 April 12 2007, 18:59:43 UTC
May I say I absolutely adore this part sweetie????? *hugs*

You show their relationship so very well and it left me sobbing (okay as usual, but anyway...)

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so_out_of_ideas April 12 2007, 19:00:47 UTC
Thank you. *murders Palpatine* *revives* *murders* *revives* *murders!!!!!!!!!!!!*

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lhinneill April 12 2007, 20:14:15 UTC
*glomps* *cries* *smacks Palpatine!* You are SO good with the action scenes, Dar. Even though the space battle was a pain to write, I'm glad you did. It was very fun to read. :)

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so_out_of_ideas April 12 2007, 20:17:50 UTC
*glomps* *cries too* I so hate Palpatine. Thanks. It helps that I have the novel to go by. When I get stuck I can go back to what Stover did and use it for a base point to figure out who's where and what's happening with the stupid droid fighters.

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anonymous April 12 2007, 20:29:07 UTC
Very, very well written! Wow, that was very well written! It shows how close Anakin and Obi-Wan are in the father/son/brothers relationship, which will be really, really good later on too. Very well done, can't wait for the next chapter!

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so_out_of_ideas April 12 2007, 20:47:47 UTC
Thanks

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hhhellcat April 12 2007, 21:24:27 UTC
Oh wow, excellent chapter. Very nicely executed!

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so_out_of_ideas April 12 2007, 21:37:08 UTC
Thanks.

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bawy April 13 2007, 00:32:20 UTC
I'm enjoyng your battle scenes very much! [As you wrote: 'Easy? No. But it might be fun.'] :D

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so_out_of_ideas April 13 2007, 14:44:51 UTC
Mesa glad deysa bein fun for someone...

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