Comments | shipper_asylum: One Path Chapter 21--The Choice

so_out_of_ideas in shipper_asylum

One Path Chapter 21--The Choice

Mar 21, 2007 22:58

Title: The Choice
Author: Lionchilde
Summary: "Your choice you have made, Obi Wan..."

Rating: PG
Length: Around 2100 words
Category: Angst/Drama
Pairings/Charaters: Obidala
A/N: One Path Chapter 21. After the arena, set during an alternate AtoC. Yeah, I skipped a bunch of stuff. We know what happens. Heh.

( The Choice )

fic: one path, fic

Comments 40

hhhellcat March 22 2007, 05:12:18 UTC

Okay her dreams / nightmares freak me out. OMG. I'm so intrigued all the same and am looking forward to how that all plays out.

And whee! Such a beautiful beautiful last part. *happy sighs*

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 05:15:21 UTC

Thank you.
And yes...her nightmares freak me out too.

janetlin March 22 2007, 06:20:10 UTC

Such pretty squishy lovey stuff! We're really going off into uncharted territory now, though, aren't we? It's fun and terrifying, a lot like being in love, I suppose. Heh.

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 15:44:19 UTC

I confess I'm probably about as scared as Padme now. lol. Despite the fact I have an outline and she doesn't.

janetlin March 22 2007, 16:22:21 UTC

But she has Obi Wan, which I think is a pretty fair trade.

I love how you're keeping everyone so closely in-character, and weaving in the bits of original dialogue seamlessly with your own. It's been a long time since I saw the movies, and I haven't read the books, and now I'm thinking I don't want to, until this is over. It's such a lovely illusion and I want to pretend this is the way it really was.

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 16:26:03 UTC

Thanks, that means a lot to me. I think it will be a long time before I can watch the movies again now. It's kinda like when I watched SG-1 after writing my Daniel/Vala epic and kept wondering why the heck he was being so rude to his wife.

erikssiren March 22 2007, 07:03:42 UTC

Finally! It only took them twenty chapters. ;) Love it, as usual. You never cease to amaze me with your ability to not only incorporate the plot of the prequel trilogy but the original trilogy as well. Update soon, please!

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 15:45:54 UTC

Thank you. I shall try to squeeze out one more chapter by Sunday.

ginger_tea March 22 2007, 09:02:57 UTC

*claps* no... *ChEERS!*

I was heart-wrenching, reading these last three chapters; but then perfectly wonderful right near the end. :)

Is there more? ;)

ginger_tea March 22 2007, 09:03:37 UTC

*It was heart-wrenching ...

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 16:01:28 UTC

lol, yeah. Knew what you meant.

ginger_tea March 22 2007, 17:09:45 UTC

just in cases :)

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bawy March 22 2007, 12:21:13 UTC

Must... breathe... *faints*

so_out_of_ideas March 22 2007, 16:02:13 UTC

Yeah, that was my reaction writing it. lol. Thank you very much.