Trapped

[shinypilot]

Title: Trapped
Fandom: Heroes
Characters/Pairings: Mohinder/Sylar (pre-slash)
Rating: PG
Summary: "Sylar was right. There was no possible way this could be the end. He had no idea what was coming, but there was one thing Mohinder was sure of. This? Was just the beginning."
Spoilers: 3x01
Author's notes: Written for the prompt "Trapped" from piping_hot's

Comments

[clearillusion]

Heee, thank you ^^ I was worried you might not think it was Mylar-y enough to count, but I intend this to the first part of many, so...

I'm glad you liked it!

[hari_kari]

Lovely! I really loved this as an explanation as to why Mohinder's key was bent, also really liked the emotion Mohinder shows about Molly's having to leave. I think it was dismissed too quickly in the actual show. Great job!

[clearillusion]

I know, right? It really irritates me, that we have no idea what's happened to Molly. Maybe it's meant to be that way, and we'll find out, but I think not. So I've made my personal canon that she's been shipped off to school in England.

Glad you liked it :)

[catoasapun]

"You made me whole again, Mohinder. No one else could do that. Just you. I spared your life once, and now you've given me back mine. Don't you think that makes us equal? Above these petty squabbles?"
Oh my god. Squeeee! So much love for this quote, I can barely even be coherent. It's sweet, and yet still cocky, still him.

This was really great. I love all the explanations that the show's writers never bother to give us; imagining poor Mohinder having to send Molly away like that, all crying and what not, was so beautiful, so tragic. Poor guy can't catch a break.

I love the interaction between them. Sylar all smooth talking and Mohinder taken aback, yet still snarky. Love it.

[clearillusion]

I'm glad you liked that quote. I was quite proud of getting that one in, too... my skills are generally in keeping Mohinder IC, not Sylar. Thank you! :)

[bonniesrg]

"Inclined his head slightly, in a parting gesture."
He does that in the show, it's so cute:D

This was great, I love Sylar showing his feelings with the touching but Momo not realizing what that means. Momo can be dense sometimes.

[clearillusion]

Thank you :)

[aurilly]

I really liked this, so much. One thing in particular is the originality of the location. I loved how you made use of canon (Mo dropping off Molly and Sylar going to Cali) to get them both to the airport and set the story here. You get extra coolness points for that!

When he became bored of that party trick
I really like the way you phrased this and made that section of the scene play out. I like this idea of Sylar using these abilities as party tricks and just switching from one to another in order not to get bored. That’s a fascinating insight into his character.

I also really liked the way Mohinder is innately able to tell when Sylar is telling the truth about something. It’s a trait that I think the show has given us, and you’ve made it slashy without taking it any farther than the show has (that was not adequately worded, but hopefully you get what I mean---high compliments, in short).

"Whatever you want, I'm not interested!"Really liked how Mohinder is unintentionally rejecting Sylar, and how he understands the reaction on

[clearillusion]

Yet again, I'm so glad you liked this. And this is going to be part one of something much longer, so check back!