Hate You 1/1

[shiny_taemin]

title: Hate You
part: 1/1
pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
rating: PG-13
genre: angst, drama, romance
warnings: post-lawsuit!fic

summary: Yunho and Jaejoong meet after a long two years of separation; Yunho is terribly awkward and Jaejoong is ridiculously nervous. Things never seem to work out for them...

Comments

[n3uromanc3r]

It was really touching and beautiful, I liked this awkward atmosphere between them.

And I'm glad that Yunho doesn't want to give up that easily! : D

[shiny_taemin]

I can't imagine if they met after two years of completely ignoring each other they would jump each other. I imagine with their personalities and their past...it'd be ridiculously awkward xP but we can only imagine...
I'm glad he doesn't either! o u o

[n3uromanc3r]

I also can't imagine it not being awkward. : D

But it seemed that Jaejoong immediately recognized Yunho, and stupid Yunho could barely recognize him even after Jae started to speak. Like Jaejoong already had prepared to eventually meet Yunho in the building since he started to film his drama but for Yunho Jae was the last person he expected to meet there so it could be a huge shock.

[shiny_taemin]

Hmm...well...the idea was that Yunho didn't really care enough to check who it was, while Jaejoong was sort of hyper aware about being in the same building as Yunho so he immediately caught on. Considering being in the same building is a true story, I wonder if they saw each other...? :\

[satoshiice]

this was really sad ;_; this is the first fic that I have read where it's JYJ that aren't allowed to visit homin instead of the other way around....I really liked it!

[shiny_taemin]

Well...they really aren't allowed to meet each other...no matter who visits the other...
._.;;;
But thank you <3333 it means a lot to me ^^

[heysupbro]

I rather liked this, and as far as I'm concerned, it's rather good for a short, unbeta-ed work. I think you did a good job setting up the tone for this fic, the awkwardness in their relationship was conveyed quite clearly.

[shiny_taemin]

Thank you very much! c: I actually...my beta isn't active anymore. I really need to find a new one. oTL

[puppal04]

Glad that someone is willing to write a fic in the present day YunJae world...thank you. I enjoyed it a lot~

[shiny_taemin]

Haha, you're welcome? >u< Thank you!

[delias_miso]

;-; I like this.

[shiny_taemin]

and I like you. :3