Fic: Close Call (2/8)

[shining_moment]

Title: Close Call (2/?)
Author: shining_moment
Characters/Pairing: Doctor, Donna
Rating: PG
Summary: Donna Noble may not be a card-carrying genius but she’s smart enough to know a good situation from a bad one and this one is bad, all kinds of bad.
Disclaimer: Still in the hands of the BBC but the day negotiations open, you can bet I'll be at the front of the queue.

Comments

[beautifulntime]

Yay! I'm a happy girl to see this up! *hugs you*

Can't wait for the next bit, sweetie. Well done as usual! :)

[shining_moment]

Aww, thanks :)

*hugs you back*

[welshred]

I'm glad she finally breathed because I didn't for that whole chapter!!

[shining_moment]

Glad it was a short chapter then, in that case!!

[scotch_gal]

I was on the edge of my seat for that whole chapter!!

no-one, no-one, tells Donna Noble to shut up before she’s ready - this bit did make me giggle though :)

Can't wait for the next bit *hugs*

[shining_moment]

Thanks hun, happy you like :)

[sapphire_child]

*air punch*

Interesting that you chose to retell the first chapter from Donna's perspective. I like that you didn't repeat all the dialogue, it's very much in her own head all the way through which I think is perfect. I'm kind of wondering now if you're going to have the next chapter from Martha's POV or swing back to the Doctor but I guess I'll just have to wait ;)

[shining_moment]

Thanks for that. I never really consciously decide with POV to go for, I just end up falling into whatever feels right to me.

[sapphire_child]

Ah the paths our muses take us down! Looking forward to more =)

[molleo]

Lurve. Lots of it. Thanks so much, can't wait for the next part!

[shining_moment]

Aww, thanks!