[Fic] The Happiest Days for Patzmelody01;PG13 [Day 10]

Aug 20, 2011 13:50

 The Happiest Days...
Couple: MinKey/Broken!MinKey, cheating/bff!JongKey, side!JongYu, MinhoxYuri (blegh...)
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, Family
Rated: PG13
Summary: Kibum had lost everything four years ago, when he had stupidly turned his own self-doubting into a simple action he would regret for the rest of his life. He lost everything...including ( Read more... )

fanfic, the happiest days, shinetae

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patzmelody01 September 18 2011, 23:16:06 UTC
Sorry, I was busy for weeks and didn't have time to comment and everything. >.<

I had to read this chapter over again.

Okay, Yuri is a legit bitch. She needs to die when this fanfics ends. She needs to go jump off a cliff or something.

Minho's there getting bad headaches and everything because he's remembering his past- he's remembering KIBUM! But Yuri goes and lies to him about how it's just his imagination or some fuck like that?!
The nerve of the bitch.
-takes out spatula-

HOW CAN SHE CALL THEM NIGHTMARES?! WHEN WHAT MINHO REMEMBERS IS THE LOVE HE'S ALWAYS FELT FOR KEY!
-so mad rn-

Minho was still the unbelievably perfect and devoted husband, but the thing was....he was not her unbelievably perfect and devoted husband. He was Kibum’s unbelievably perfect and devoted husband.
Still is bitch. You can't marry two people.
So because they never actually divorced, your marriage to Minho is a joke.
:D

Oh Taemin, how I love you for forcing Key out. I love how you freaked out about thongs.
xD

But Taeminnie...it's rude to push people off a cliff-ish thing! Even a small one!

“I won’t, Kibum. I won’t do this anymore. I won’t give you everything you want...I won’t.”
Kibum didn’t know why the words resounded in his head over and over again as he continued to be still under the water. He didn’t know why his heart was pounding, or why he suddenly felt like sobbing and begging for Minho to come back to him all of a sudden. He didn’t know why his heart felt as if it had been ripped in two again after so many years of trying to put it back together. He didn’t know why, but it was so strong that he didn’t even notice his lungs failing him.
“You always gave me everything I could ever want, Minho...but you should have always known....I only ever wanted you. I’ve only ever wanted you and you alone from the moment I met you. And I should have never let objects and money cloud your belief in that. I never should have. I should have just told you every day, I only want you. I want you so badly, Minho-yah...” He found himself thinking, as he closed his eyes slowly, struggling to keep his mouth closed.
I find it sweet and heartbreaking at the same time that it was Minho who was last on Key's mind. How he was reminded of how much he needs him and misses it.
The quote "Before you die, you see your falsh before your eyes". And I was just reminded of that here because Minho was and STILL IS Kibum's life.
<3

That face--those cheekbones, that nose, those lips--they all suddenly clouded his mind over again, and he knew he already seen this man once before, asleep in his arms, though it seemed as if he had been in that position a thousand times already.
AIGOOO!
REMEMBER HIIIM!

Before a word could be spoken, or a thought could be made, both children standing witness gasped a little and watched in shock as Minho immediately leaned down, smashing his mouth against the other man’s quickly.
EEEP!

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patzmelody01 September 18 2011, 23:16:54 UTC
Taemin closed his mouth from where it was hanging open, and stepped closer to Yoogeun, placing his head on the little boy’s shoulder, taking it upon himself to try to explain the situation in front of them. “Your dad’s not kissing him, Yoogeun-ah, what he’s trying to do is--” But before he could even get his sentence out, his jaw dropped in shock again as Kibum suddenly raised his arm, wrapping it around Minho’s neck, fingers slipping into his short hair, lips pressing together passionately. “--OH MY GOD, KEY EOMMA, STOP KISSING AJEOSSI!” Taemin belted out loudly.
OMG TAEMIN, JUST LET THEM KISS EACH OTHER SENSELESS OKAY!

Minho’s eyes immediately snapped open the moment he felt the man below him starting to move, but by the time he understood what was happening, it was already too late. The mysterious boy already had his arms wrapped around his neck, long fingers combing through his hair as he brought their lips together again, this time pressing against each other’s passionately. He could do nothing, and did nothing as he found his own lips responding to their sudden company, his eyes falling closed heavily.
Yes...kiss like no one else's around.
>D

I really miss this fanfic, please update soon. ;-;

PS: I hope that your Mom's fine now.

PPS: I miss your old journal layout. It was so much easier to read from there, and it loaded much faster. ;-;

PPPS:
Please update soon.
I love your Minkey and needs you to update ASAP. :))

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