SSS 2014: For justangel
For: justangel
From: Your Secret Santa
Title: Trial and Error.
Pairing: Onew/Key.
Rating: PG-13.
Warnings: None.
( Kibum only knew how to worship in the bedroom, he couldn’t map his words into sentences and verses that made Jinki’s blood race - he only knew command of the touch of his lips and his tongue, of the scrape of his nails and the strokes of his fingers. )
From: Your Secret Santa
Title: Trial and Error.
Pairing: Onew/Key.
Rating: PG-13.
Warnings: None.
( Kibum only knew how to worship in the bedroom, he couldn’t map his words into sentences and verses that made Jinki’s blood race - he only knew command of the touch of his lips and his tongue, of the scrape of his nails and the strokes of his fingers. )
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I've been on a leave of LJ and I just remembered that I have this exchanged, so I checked and here this fic was!
First of all, I can't thank you enough for taking my prompt and writing it into this beautiful, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL piece. The first sentence in the summary killed me. And as I read further, I can't help but falling in love with the way you portrayed both of their inner thought. I'm so relieved that you didn't pick infidelity as the issue here, because as much as they could resolve it, there will still be issue. I'm happy that you chose Kibum to be the one who insisted, who reached out, who asserted his feeling first. And I love how the tension slowly unraveled into oh-so-cheesy sap which I can't help not to squeal over.
It was a very pleasant reading, Santa. Thank you!
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And although it would've been easier if Jinki communicated with Kibum his insecurities but I understand his hesitation. ;_; It's hard to speak sometimes especially when the answer could be something you're dreading. > < It's sweet of Kibum to appease Jinki's wallowing like that.
Anyway, this is really beautiful writing, as expected. :)
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thanks for this wonderful story.
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