SSS 2014: For lucentric

Mar 21, 2014 22:53

For: lucentic
From: Your Secret Santa

Title: the burden of memory
Pairing: Minho/Kibum
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Authors’ Notes: Thank you for the beautiful prompts! I sort of mix and matched the feel of a few of them. I hope this is at least somewhat close to what you were looking for! Summary text from Marilynne Robinson’s Gilead.

Memory can make a thing seem to have been much more than it was. )

*2013, pairing: minho/key, rating: pg-13

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salome620 April 4 2014, 15:46:49 UTC
ugh, sad MinKey. huhuhu...

even though it's heart-breaking, it is still beautiful. the way you described Minho's mourning, the way his memories torture him. i could relate to those feelings of emptiness, of missing someone even though he is just right there.

thanks for sharing!

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lucentic May 11 2014, 13:54:25 UTC
oh god. first of all can i please apologise for not commenting on this fic sooner? after i dropped out of white day i completely forgot about the event until i stumbled across an old email notification on it. im sorry if you thought i didn't care enough about the fic to comment, i just got to read it today.

which by the way, i think the fic is beautiful. i don't quite remember the prompts that i gave you, but i like how you've put their relationship as a kind of middle level thing - not here, and not quite there because of all the feelings the two of them haven't sorted out yet. there isn't much action, but there are a lot of flashbacks and poignant musings that make my heart just go uhrghsad. they're my otp and i really like how they've been portrayed. (by the way your vocab is also beautiful i like it very much)

thank you so much for having written this for me, and i was a dick for not having come by to appreciate it earlier. please forgive me ;;;;

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