SSS 2010: for lovescone

Dec 21, 2010 10:32

For: lovescone
From: Your Secret Santa

Title: Apple Cider and Firework Kisses
Pairing: Jonghyun/Taemin
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,273
Summary: Wherein Jonghyun frowns and Taemin smiles. And Jinki manages to fall over.

“I still don’t see why I had to come with you,” Jonghyun mutters under his breath, hauling his bags away from the rented car and toward their new apartment. )

rating: pg, *2010, pairing: jonghyun/taemin

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salted_taiyaki December 21 2010, 21:08:30 UTC
He knows that look. He’s been on the receiving end of that look. He knows that, by the end of the night, Kibum and this Taemin guy will be the best of friends. ahh something about this made me laugh, it just seems to sum up kibum's personality so well!

Jinki steps on to the ice next, falling down straight away. argh omg so cute, i love it, why so clumsy jinki.

He’s finding it really hard to remember why he’s been so grumpy recently. Especially when Taemin smiles at him just so, or runs on ahead of him and points at something excitedly in a shop window. oh so sweet ;A;

i love the way you so simply add character to them! with few words that describe them so well haha. the transition is so perfect, so smooth into the lovey-dovey stuff eee i'm loving it so much. despite all the references to the cold, i feel warm ㅎㅎㅎ perfect christmas story, doh ;w; i'm sure lovescone will love this ~~

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lovescone December 21 2010, 22:07:31 UTC
oh my god, this was the cutest thing ever and. i can't even. sldfkslkfs i have cavities from this slfsl ALSO GRUMPY JONGHYUN IS THE BEST SOBS. omg thank you so much ;_________________; ♥♥♥

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hikaritsubasa December 22 2010, 14:34:30 UTC
“Oh my God, someone’s inside my skull Jonghyun. And they’re trying to get out,” Kibum rasps, rolling off of his bed with a moan. “Make it stop,” he whimpers.
this is hilarious...

“Your number. In case you fall over while I’m doing something else. Or! Or!” Taemin exclaims, his face brightening as he thinks of more ideas, “In case someone accidentally stabs you with their foot, and you need me to get an ambulance for you! Or if you get frostbite and you need me to carry you to a chair. Or… in case you’re hungry sometime and you want some company during dinner?”

can't stop laughing when i read this!
this is good...
love it!

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perplexsense December 29 2010, 19:24:50 UTC
aaww I love this!
especially the part when Taemin loses his cool to Jonghyun! it's just too adorable ♥

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jinkibumiminho May 5 2011, 18:57:33 UTC
This is hilarious:

Kibum doesn’t fail to notice the way Jonghyun’s eyes light up when he looks at Taemin, nor the way both of their hands stay under the table.

Hand-holding. Honestly. It’s sickening.

He turns back to Minho and Jinki, laughing at Jinki’s antics and Minho’s fond exasperation. After a few minutes, they share a knowing look, and Kibum turns, confused, toward Jonghyun.

Only to see his and Taemin’s heads bent together, whispers being thrown back and forth, secret smiles playing on lips. Kibum groans and calls the waiter over. He’s way too sober for this.

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“Oh my God, someone’s inside my skull Jonghyun. And they’re trying to get out,” Kibum rasps, rolling off of his bed with a moan. “Make it stop,” he whimpers.

Wonderful, just wonderful.

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