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SSS 2010: for bree_nd

Dec 31, 2010 23:02

For: bree_nd
From: Your (Emergency) Secret Santa

Title: Stand Too Close
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: R
Wordcount: 3,127
Summary: If I stand too close, I might fall in. But if I'm too far gone, I'll never win. If you believe in me, I might just want to spend some time with you again.

( We always fight when he comes home smelling like sweat, booze, and sex. )

*2010, rating: r, pairing: onew/key

Comments 6

bree_nd January 1 2011, 08:04:02 UTC

Omg, I dunno who you are but I already love you! *glomps*
Many many thanks; I love this fic so much!
I'd give you an epic comment but I'm speechless!
I'll repay you with something if I get the chance! Thank you so much!

pikagyu January 4 2011, 17:46:01 UTC

Lol, I'm glad you liked it! They didn't tell us who the recipients would be for the emergency pinch hitter fics so I just hoped that you didn't hate first person when I was writing this.

lunayeppeo January 2 2011, 08:22:14 UTC

This was a nice read. The rocky progression of their relationship was interesting to read, and I like how everything didn't immediately fall into place.

pikagyu January 4 2011, 17:48:30 UTC

Well, she wanted angst and drama with a happy ending. And with an onkey relationship, this was the first thing I thought of (after waking up in the middle of the night lol). If she didn't ask for a happy ending, it probably would've been much more... Doused? Not as happy? Lol, I don't know how to describe it. I'm glad you liked it though, thanks for reading!

playingods January 3 2011, 09:59:50 UTC

Wow what a nice story! Onkey's relationship is just fantastic. Yeah, Jinki is one of those people. ♥

pikagyu January 4 2011, 17:50:19 UTC

Lol, I dont know. This is how I see onkey relationship. I don't really ship them so it was a nice departure from what I normally write. Jinki is his own special breed lol. I don't know what else to say about it. Thanks so much for reading!