This was a really engaging fic! Your attention to detail is really good, and I like how you handle Key and Minho in this fic, especially Key. I really like this part: Yes, he tells himself. Yes, they are. He reaffirms this again and again as he resolutely snatches the shirt slung over the chair. I will save lives, he declares, slipping into his starched white gown. Yet still feeling more like a child playing dress-up on Halloween than a real doctor, he places the stethoscope across his neck and huffs.
I'll definitely look out for the reveals to know who my Santa is :) I'll shoot you a PM once I find out who you are.
This left me a bitter bitch, just so you know. JSYK. YOU JUST PUNCHED ME RIGHT IN THE HEART.
But I loved it. I loved the OnKey relationship, Jonghyun's small roll in this, and the way you hinted towards Minho being a psycho douche early on. I was totally just anticipating for how it was going to end.
Crying at the way you announced Taemin's death, like, what. WHAT. ;A;
Holy fuck, this is.. very well written. It leaves me speechless. Kind of reminded me of American Psycho and in a good way. The build up is good, I like how we can feel the creepiness of Minho early on, an anticipate how things are going to go down in the end. I was really creep-ed out by Minho watching Kibum change ans stare at his hands. I like all the medical things here, it's really well done, shows you made research. Teamin was heartbreaking, more heartbreaking was all those things Minho made Kibum do, "to learn", to "prove himself". Jonghyun was heartbreaking, his death really got to me. More so than Teamin, maybe because Kibum could have saved him. (he didn't , right?) And the ending killed me. Was it only me that was scared by Kibum's final words?! I should be studying my Pediatrics, but instead I was reading this.
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THIS IS FUCKNG AMAZING. ;~;
You totally took me of guard. And the fucking twist at the end. Fuck.
FUCKING LUCKY PERSON WHICH GOT THIS DEDICATED TO.
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This was a really engaging fic! Your attention to detail is really good, and I like how you handle Key and Minho in this fic, especially Key. I really like this part:
Yes, he tells himself. Yes, they are. He reaffirms this again and again as he resolutely snatches the shirt slung over the chair. I will save lives, he declares, slipping into his starched white gown. Yet still feeling more like a child playing dress-up on Halloween than a real doctor, he places the stethoscope across his neck and huffs.
I'll definitely look out for the reveals to know who my Santa is :) I'll shoot you a PM once I find out who you are.
Thank you for writing my request!
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But I loved it. I loved the OnKey relationship, Jonghyun's small roll in this, and the way you hinted towards Minho being a psycho douche early on. I was totally just anticipating for how it was going to end.
Crying at the way you announced Taemin's death, like, what. WHAT. ;A;
sfqwdfiqd Yeah, I just really loved this. ♥
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Kind of reminded me of American Psycho and in a good way. The build up is good, I like how we can feel the creepiness of Minho early on, an anticipate how things are going to go down in the end. I was really creep-ed out by Minho watching Kibum change ans stare at his hands.
I like all the medical things here, it's really well done, shows you made research.
Teamin was heartbreaking, more heartbreaking was all those things Minho made Kibum do, "to learn", to "prove himself".
Jonghyun was heartbreaking, his death really got to me. More so than Teamin, maybe because Kibum could have saved him. (he didn't , right?)
And the ending killed me. Was it only me that was scared by Kibum's final words?!
I should be studying my Pediatrics, but instead I was reading this.
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I totally thought Ho would've put Tae on the table as one of Key's practice cadavers! >.<
Thanks for sharing^^
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