SSS 2010: for jirurukyungmi

Dec 25, 2010 11:34

For: jirurukyungmi
From: Your Secret Santa

Title: Family Christmas
Pairing: Onew/Taemin, OT5
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,650
Summary: The thing about Christmas? Family isn't the only people to spend it with.

Taemin hates having to layer up in the wintertime. )

rating: pg, *2010, pairing: onew/taemin

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lunayeppeo December 26 2010, 15:38:23 UTC
Perfect SHINee Christmas! The OT5 friendship love is wonderful, and I love how you've written each one of them. Taemin, in particular, was a darling, but I just really love how they all interacted with each other. The entire piece really delivers that warm, fuzzy feeling I love about Christmas. Great job!

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yunho January 2 2011, 05:48:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad I was able to deliver you warm fuzzies (as my old PE teacher used to say)! :D It was my first OT5 fic and only second Ontae, but I'm happy I didn't miss the mark too badly!

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avirjin December 27 2010, 05:42:35 UTC
I don't know why more people didn't comment on this, lol. It's very Christmasy and OT5-ish and it makes me feel happy. :) It's so cute, and idk, I wish I had been able to actually read it on Christmas so I could have been in a better mood for it. Nice job. :)

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yunho January 2 2011, 05:51:16 UTC
Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it! It was actually my first OT5 but I'm happy I didn't muck it up!

Ah, but it wasn't posted too late after Christmas, so it's alright, but thank you again! I hope you had a good Christmas!

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jirurukyungmi December 27 2010, 14:58:31 UTC
Wow, its the day after our second day of christmas and now I wish it was christmas again this was absolutely beautiful!
It was all I wished for in the fic and you who have written this which I still don't know who did is the best!
Thank you sooo much for writing me this fic I love family bonds and i think its the most important thing with christmas then gifts and the whole morning breath made me laugh really hard and then the kiss the image in my head of the kiss playing in the snow was just love thank you very much! And when I know who you are I will promise you to write some gooey sweet SHINee also! I MEAN IT!

THANK YOU A GAZILLION TIMES! <3

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yunho January 2 2011, 06:00:40 UTC
Aww thank you so much, I'm so relieved that you liked it! I had some trouble gauging just what elements to include but I write mostly fluff anyway, so finally settled on just writing whatever came to mind, lol.

I'm glad I was able to include what you wanted to see, I tried to make the sweaters and snowflakes and all things wintry that you seem to adore into it :)

It was also my first OT5 fic too, so thank god I didn't muck it up too terribly! :D

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salted_taiyaki December 29 2010, 17:29:20 UTC
perfect ♥ it was lighthearted with the bit of heartbreak for taemin. the way you gave them all character was perfect! i loved their interactions as friends and family :) it was so cute ♥

also the ending l o l love it, wonderful way to wrap it up. great job!

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yunho January 2 2011, 06:01:48 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! :D It was my first OT5 fic and only the second Ontae I've ever written, thankfully I didn't miss the mark too badly!

Lol, I couldn't let the fic get too sentimental, right? ;)

Thanks again! ♥

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saracupcaked December 30 2010, 12:58:31 UTC
I love the fact that this is both ontae and an ot5 fic omg ♥ your little scenes feel really real - my favourites part was the conflict resolution bit Taemin had to go through with Jonghyun and where Kibum and Taemin were making snow angels. and Taemin and Jinki and the mistletoe at the end? perfect :')

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yunho January 2 2011, 06:04:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thank you very much! It was actually my first OT5 fic and only the second ontae I've ever written >_> The snow angel scene was actually my favorite to write, I'm so glad you liked it too! :D

Thank you again! ♥

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