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SHINee Fic Mix 2011 - pikagyu

Nov 01, 2011 20:32

Title: You Make it Hard to Smile (because you make it hard to breathe)
Author: pikagyu
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: I had no idea where to begin and where to end, but it all worked out somehow. I’m not quite sure.

Original Work: Saturn V by capebuffalo

( There are too many things running through Minho's mind, and none of them manifest the way he means them. )

rating: pg, pairing: onew/minho, *2011

Comments 9

yunho November 2 2011, 08:25:16 UTC

The first thing that struck me was that you wrote it in present tense! \o/ omg idt i've ever seen you write in present tense......or i'm just failing sorry .__.;;

but omg lilly i loved it! you got minho so well and and and idk what else to say except that i loved this and ide like onho. ♥ to you bb

yunho November 2 2011, 08:26:02 UTC

and oops i hope its okay to comment here before your fic mixee D:

pikagyu November 14 2011, 02:58:28 UTC

Yeah, you know I don't really like present tense, but I tried to keep with the style of the original fanfic, but dang it's hard. I don't know how people do it lol. I'm glad you liked it! I still need to comment on your remix of mine OTL

jinkibumiminho November 3 2011, 21:07:17 UTC

I loved the original and recognized it in this before I even realized it was a remix.
Wonderful! Wonderful!

pikagyu November 14 2011, 02:59:18 UTC

I tried to stay with the original as much as I could and retell it from a different view, but I suppose it ended up with me just putting in bits of the original in here... more than I should... but... lol I'm glad you enjoyed it.

civilized_era November 4 2011, 02:37:57 UTC

(So from what I heard, here were some really emotional responses to reading this fic -- not just my own -- almost like a catharsis, and even though I can't speak for anyone else, I thought you ought to know ( ... )

pikagyu November 14 2011, 03:05:00 UTC

I had a bit of an emotional breakdown when I saw your name in the email they sent me for my ficmix...ee? Mainly because when I think of Minho/Onew fic, I think of yours first, so I'm here thinking OMFGWTFBBQHAXXOR how am I going to remix these?

My first idea was to remix it from Minho's POV and leave it there, but then I realized that maybe I was following your fic too closely and tried to write other scenes that may have happened, how they might have happened in your universe from my point of view, from what I saw in my head when I first read your fic. Minho is the hardest person for me to write in SHINee, so I hope I didn't butcher him too much for you.

But I did have fun! Maybe I cried and smashed at my keyboard a little too much, but I enjoyed it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it too!

oconje November 11 2011, 13:25:13 UTC

I really love your remix (and all your other fics). You fleshed out Saturn V wonderfully. Bravo!

pikagyu November 14 2011, 03:05:18 UTC

Thanks you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! haha