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SHINee Fic Mix 2011 - caitlinonkey

Nov 01, 2011 20:19

Title: Inside; looking out
Author: caitlinonkey
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Non-graphic sex scene
Author's Notes: A snippet from Key’s point of view of the wonderful original written by voltagequeen. Go read hers.

Original Work: View From The Outside by voltagequeen

( I wonder does he quite know what he’s doing, is he aware of how my heart’s hammering against my ribcage desperate for him to look again, look straight into my eyes and make me feel the electricity just one more time. )

rating: nc-17, pairing: jonghyun/key, *2011

Comments 1

voltagequeen November 2 2011, 03:08:03 UTC

This is absolutely amazing. I LOVE what you did with it! Everything is so intimate and emotional; I got goosebumps while I was reading it.

“It was cold next door, and I missed your Kibum smell” ;________; That line is so simple and perfect, gahhh.

Seriously, the last two paragraphs are so ridiculously GOOD. Sometimes I think I’ve fallen too far, and I won’t possibly be able to contain this ache anymore. It kills me to pretend." Perfect last line. Perfect everything. Thank you so much for writing this!