;~~~~~~; What is this emotional roller-coaster that I can't not read? I freaking love this, even though I'm sad over their break-up. You get some A+++'s for that very tasteful & wonderful make-out/sex scene. I like how it wasn't full-blown but still very well done & I appreciate how well-written it is! I was dreading the break-up scene & you did a good job at making me tear up. I wanted Jonghyun to do some denial. Force some answers out of Jinki! I think Kyuhyun deserves an official title as comedic relief. His banter with Jinki had me giggling like a loon. Especially his offer to kick Jonghyun's ass :P But now the two have to sing a duet together! (Beautiful & perfect song choice, btw ~_^) Surely something will be resolved! I think Jonghyun is more of a mess over this break-up than Jinki (& we the readers) know of. At least I selfishly hope so! When Jinki got the phone call I thought it was going to be some dramatic Jonghyun-tries-to-kill-himself-because-he-needs-Jinki, but it wasn't. (I think k-music video have really warped me.) I could say a ton more & shower you with more praises but I'll cut off this long comment right about here! I'll be singing your praises (or my own woes if it's another tear-inducer) next chapter~ Keep up the good work :D
You get some A+++'s for that very tasteful & wonderful make-out/sex scene. I like how it wasn't full-blown but still very well done & I appreciate how well-written it is! I was dreading the break-up scene & you did a good job at making me tear up. I wanted Jonghyun to do some denial. Force some answers out of Jinki!
I think Kyuhyun deserves an official title as comedic relief. His banter with Jinki had me giggling like a loon. Especially his offer to kick Jonghyun's ass :P
But now the two have to sing a duet together! (Beautiful & perfect song choice, btw ~_^) Surely something will be resolved! I think Jonghyun is more of a mess over this break-up than Jinki (& we the readers) know of. At least I selfishly hope so! When Jinki got the phone call I thought it was going to be some dramatic Jonghyun-tries-to-kill-himself-because-he-needs-Jinki, but it wasn't. (I think k-music video have really warped me.)
I could say a ton more & shower you with more praises but I'll cut off this long comment right about here! I'll be singing your praises (or my own woes if it's another tear-inducer) next chapter~ Keep up the good work :D
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