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FIC: Growing Up (Taemin/Key)

Nov 15, 2008 22:55

Title: Growing Up
Author: jacqandtherat
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff & a little angst?
Pairing: Taemin/Key
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters.

Author's comments: Fiction. My first fic ever so forgive me if it sucks. Tell me if it does though, i wanna improve ♥ Enjoy!

( Taemin knew that although he looked cute... )

pairing: taemin/key, rating: g

Comments 9

nyappyx3 November 15 2008, 16:09:09 UTC

Awwwww.

baby_buggs November 15 2008, 20:15:23 UTC

aww!! its so cute1 (no pun intended)

she_devil666 November 15 2008, 20:45:56 UTC

Jonghyun is a fandom o.O I think you meant to put SHINee ^^ The disclaimer should be about how you own nothing (unless it's an original story or original characters) and aren't making money off of it, yada yada yada... What you wrote was just the author's comments~

AWWW! So *cough* cute XD There's no other way for me to say that! Other than a few grammatical mistakes, it was really good!

murd3r4lyf3 November 15 2008, 22:58:09 UTC

i loled hard when Jonghun is a fandomn
XDDDDD
but this is cute!!!!!!!!!!

jacqandtherat November 16 2008, 04:55:16 UTC

Hahha i have no idea what a fandom is. I thought it meant a random character in the story or something, LOLS. I thought it was pretty bad ): Thanks for commenting and for the constructive criticism everyone ♥ I'll try to improve!