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SHINee Duets 2011: incessance & the_suit_case

Mar 04, 2011 14:47

Title: Kallisti (The Fairest)
Authors: incessance & the_suit_case
Pairing: onesided Onew/Minho
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,015
Warnings: Strange Greek Mythology references!
Authors’ Notes: Originally, we were inspired by the Philophobia quote, but it quickly spiraled away from resembling it even remotely.

( You never wanted to be Persephone, but you’d eat the seeds without thought if he’d look at you with something other than an absent tug on the corner of his lips. )

rating: pg, *2011, pairing: onew/minho

Comments 13

misono_soup March 5 2011, 23:00:03 UTC

I think this is beautiful. It's lyrical and poetic and sad and sweet. Your heart breaks for Onew who loves so completely and for Minho, who cannot love him back. And while this could be 'angsty'...there's a certain level of being removed from it, keeping you from drowing in the pain of it. There is resignation and acceptance in all aspects of the sorrow Onew feels, as though this is a sad story and he knows it will be and yet he wants to read it anyhow, until it finally ends.

I love it.

acrosstherug March 6 2011, 09:21:41 UTC

there are times when everything's beautiful and nothing hurts. and then there are times when nothing's beautiful and everything hurts.

this is the exception. everything is beautiful and everything hurts.

i'm in love ♥

evilnekochan March 6 2011, 13:31:03 UTC

just... beautiful. Somewhat sad, but your choice of words... makes me speechless. <3

tsme89 March 6 2011, 22:19:36 UTC

The drabbles are so beautifully heartbreaking. ;_; I read the entire thing twice and fell even deeper in love with it the second time.

onew March 7 2011, 03:17:46 UTC

Why is this OnHo so sad :( I like that you made the segments short yet so meaningful. It's as if each scene has so much feeling in it. Awesome, awesome job on this :)