No Excuses (OnKey)

[a_life_defiant]

Title: No Excuses
Author: a_life_defiant 
Pairing: OnKey (Onew/Key)
Rating: R for strong violence.
Summary: Onew is angry and Key is on the receiving end of the abuse.

Comments

[towelettepower]

SPOT. B)

[a_life_defiant]

All yours bb!

♥

[towelettepower]

"Woman Abuse" was all I can think of. D:

And Key's such an Umma. ;^; Proud of him... & I feel bad for him... going though all that. T_T

I really like the whole Onew being dark and violent. o.o

What a great way to express your anger, bb. Truly great. :')

[a_life_defiant]

keke, that's kind of what I was going for.... XD

I think he should be on a poster for domestic violence and it would look like this

[peigurrrl]

D< Onew, you unexpectedly awful person. How, how could you hit Key?!

...Key is such a good umma. He should pull a Jaejoong and file for divorce from this bad appa ('cause everyone knows Jae was just sick and tired of all the Homin going on behind his back). KEY WOULD WIN THE CUSTODY BATTLE TOO.

Umm.... Yeah, not making sense, my brain is broken. But I'm sad for Key right now. And the violent inclinations I usually reserve for Minho have suddenly split in half, looking for an Onew to hate on. And omgggg if Onew ever hits Taemin... Forget divorce, go straight for the chainsaw, Key.

Now I'm just curious how he's gonna explain thebp bruises to the other members.

[a_life_defiant]

IKR? it's like....

[fantasydesire]

ugh baby... wow. you're really angry~
deep breaths. magnae will make you happy soon. no. not me. ayame.
I cant write anything to make you feel better bb.. sorry..
TT____________TT

[a_life_defiant]

LOL she'd better put out! I need happy fic!

yeah, you're just gonna write some end of the world shit that's gonna make me all "T_T WHY??!?!??!?!!" and things of that nature. XD keke

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[fantasydesire]

hey hey.. YOU just wrote something depressing altogether, sis.. not moi~
XD

ps : can I make a sequel to this? or are you doing it? ^^

[a_life_defiant]

Sequel's all yours if you want it bb! Imma be out of town for a few days anyway so I won't be able to get to it right away. I know you'll do it justice!

go forth and write sissy! I can't wait to see what you come up with. :D

♥

[maxism12]

DUDE...NO...DUDE..JUST NO....DUUUUUDE. O_O

ONEW...NO, JUST NO WAY! /grabs your phone away IT MAY ACT ALL WEIRD BUT YOU ARE NOT GOING TO MIRROR WHAT ONEW DID UP THERE. JUST NO. D8<

/sobs KEY...SWEET VENOM FILLED KEY WHY SO SWEET??? /sobs forever.

Hang in there♥

[a_life_defiant]

LOL @ you protecting the phone. (it's miraculously alive now BTW, go figure)

don't cry bb! I'm sorry I had to do this to Key, but he was the only logical choice. iPhone does pretty much everything for me, and Key is good at everything in the world. they are equals, keke XD

thankies for reading

♥

[maxism12]

Yes well, being harsh is mean D: (( idk i want to be dramatic.....)) ((the phone loves you, that's the reson it works))

IKR???? KEY IS PERFECT ♥

I cant imagine Onew being dark and violent actually, but it's all hot in my head and that usually leads to OnKey angry sex T_T ((so i like sex~))

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[a_life_defiant]

OnKey angry sex is all types of delicious.....*wants*

♥

[cloudyday2sb]

omg this was just so full of dark rage and all that awesome shit. i loved it to idiotic bits, even though Key's hurting:D

/needs a sequel

[a_life_defiant]

YAY! I'm so glad you liked it!

Thank you!!

hmm....I'll take that into consideration ;D

♥