2 DAY ROCKED!!!!!
work was cool, i jod tod ay was to float, thats what i did and it rocked, i finshed almost all off my work thats due and finaly this http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=13461&chapter=15 chapter athought it was short and could be a bit more well writen since the fist few chapters were better writen, i loved it best thing about it, the fall
this it is >>>
“Don’t leave. Can we talk a while?” Miroshi called out, watching the fire demon walk down the steps but, Hiei wasn’t listening. The sound of splashing feet could be heard. The steps of a frantic person dashing down the steps at breakneck speed. Not paying attention, the person shoved Hiei off the side of the low railing and kept running. Free falling forward, feeling gravity pulling her down Hiei desperately tried to control the fall, transforming it into a flip. When her feet connected with the ground, Hiei lost her footing because of the rain, slamming her head against the stone. At that moment, Hiei lost consciousness and her body tumbled down to the bottom.
A few hours, later, Genkai, Yukina, and Shiori were outside of the hospital room. Each woman had a grave expression on their face.
‘Does Hiei ever get a break?' <<<< = this line is good to, beacuse every thing bad that happens in this and most of the real story happens to Hiei, the best turm i can give this, was used by the devil in Jhony the homical maniac, 'the universes shit bad.'
and i own a convertable how cool is that???
this it is >>>
“Don’t leave. Can we talk a while?” Miroshi called out, watching the fire demon walk down the steps but, Hiei wasn’t listening. The sound of splashing feet could be heard. The steps of a frantic person dashing down the steps at breakneck speed. Not paying attention, the person shoved Hiei off the side of the low railing and kept running. Free falling forward, feeling gravity pulling her down Hiei desperately tried to control the fall, transforming it into a flip. When her feet connected with the ground, Hiei lost her footing because of the rain, slamming her head against the stone. At that moment, Hiei lost consciousness and her body tumbled down to the bottom.
A few hours, later, Genkai, Yukina, and Shiori were outside of the hospital room. Each woman had a grave expression on their face.
‘Does Hiei ever get a break?' <<<< = this line is good to, beacuse every thing bad that happens in this and most of the real story happens to Hiei, the best turm i can give this, was used by the devil in Jhony the homical maniac, 'the universes shit bad.'
and i own a convertable how cool is that???